Personal concrit link:Here! (http://chosenfake.livejournal.com/711.html) Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y! Other comments? I've noticed a few minor things about Luke's speech patterns and preferences that I've tried to correct over the past few months, but I'm really more concerned about the big things. He's been all over recently, from the upcoming plot to being scarred for life to hitting on people and being embarrassed about it. Leave me your thoughts. I am also taking advice on the way I've set up the plot so far, though I doubt there will be anything conclusive until it's over.
Saffy
Characters played:
Luke fon Fabre ♪ Tales of the Abyss ♪
Personal concrit link: Here! (http://chosenfake.livejournal.com/711.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y!
Other comments? I've noticed a few minor things about Luke's speech patterns and preferences that I've tried to correct over the past few months, but I'm really more concerned about the big things. He's been all over recently, from the upcoming plot to being scarred for life to hitting on people and being embarrassed about it. Leave me your thoughts. I am also taking advice on the way I've set up the plot so far, though I doubt there will be anything conclusive until it's over.