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Player name: Caru
Characters played:
♛ Cain Hargreaves || Godchild ||

misterblackbird
♞ The Man With No Name || "The Dollars Trilogy" |

withloadedguns
☠ R[andall] F[lagg] || The Dark Tower et. al. ||

unflagging

Personal concrit link: ♚: anon-enabled, ip-disabled, and screened--in the hopes that you may find it useful and informative.

Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes & yes.

Other comments? Ask me questions, tell me things. I'm glad of any comments, questions, remarks, advice, suggestions, thoughts, letters, Morse code, telegrams, or smoke signals regarding my characters. I always get inspired after HMD--for whatever reason, it always makes me want to play more. I'm glad of any feedback at all. Let me know what you think.

I will admit that I haven't been as active or involved as I wish of late. RL >>>> RP, but I think I'm getting a slightly better balance worked out. ILUall and I won't give up.

Also, in the spirit of full disclosure, it only seems fair to tell you that The Man With No Name will probably be departing the City in the near future. He needs room to roam and this city life is starting to get to him. So please be aware of that (I'll make a formal drop post when I have the heart to do it).

Player name: Mici
Characters played: Eden Mac Cionaoith :: OC ::

eiremagic
Saya Wallace :: OC ::

synanthrope
Steve Rogers :: Captain America ::

punchedhitler
Derek Hale :: Teen Wolf ::

lupusalpha
Mr. Pink :: Reservoir Dogs ::

pinkeffinprofessional
Personal concrit link: Here!
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: If you like!
Other comments?

Edited 2013-11-29 05:29 (UTC)

Player name: Princess Cupcake
Characters played: Lydia Martin :: Teen Wolf ::

lefthandedgenius
Personal concrit link: Here you go.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: I prefer non-anon, but will accept it.
Other comments?

Player name: Tasha
Characters played: Meyer Lansky :: Boardwalk Empire ::

recognize_an_opportunity
Jimmy Darmody :: Boardwalk Empire ::

trenchknives
Michael Ginsberg :: Mad Men ::

just_displaced
Personal concrit link: Meyer
Jimmy
Ginsberg
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed, but not necessarily encouraged. I don't bite, I promise.
Other comments? I'm always glad for feedback! Could I be doing more to make my characters enjoyable for you? I know I need to get Ginsberg a little more out there, but he's still fairly new yet. Other than that, is there anything I need to change? Anything you'd like to see? Tell me!

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Tasha. Tasha, Tasha, Tasha. Where do I even start. When I joined Poly with Marguerite, I didn't know what to expect in terms of her profession. I didn't know how it would affect her CR or if she'd even get CR in that regard. Then she met Meyer and it was not-quite-love at first sight. For both her and for me. I am so happy that you've been so welcoming of all my requests and plots and I am, as you already know, really looking forward to seeing where the two of them will go from here. It can only be good, because it has been fantastic so far.

I just love how you play Meyer. I've only seen select clips from Boardwalk, but your voice for him seems spot on and your characterisation seems wholly consistent. Which is always a joy to read. More importantly, though, you obviously care about the character. You're invested in everything you put him through and what it does to him as a result. It's RPing at its finest and I hope to see you continue the good work for a long time to come. Hopefully with me as an RP partner as well as an appreciative onlooker.

Wow, what can I even say to all this awesome praise? I'm so glad our CR developed the way it did, and you know I'm gonna keep on wanting to do plots with you, because, well, it's been nothing but a delight so far. I'm glad that my passion for the character comes through... I think anyone who sees me on Plurk knows how passionate I am about him but it's fantastic to hear that you see it in the way I play, too :)

Player name: ALMS the something and something
Characters played:

☆ Allison Cameron :: House M.D. :: as_damaged
crit post | voicemail
☆ Neil Perry :: Dead Poets Society :: had_not_lived
crit post | voicemail
☆ Frankie Dalton :: Daybreakers :: never_very_good
crit post | voicemail
☆ Isaak Sirko :: Dexter :: defies_reason
crit post | voicemail

Personal concrit link: see above
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: should be enabled; is not preferred.
Other comments? Have been a bit sporadic the past two weeks or so, but hopefully over the worst of the... whatever has been wrong with my brain. If anyone wants to plot, I'd love to :3

Alms you are kind of the best. And I don't say that without good reason. I really enjoy the CR we've had (and will hopefully continue to have) and I also really enjoy how your characters all have very distinct voices and none of them are quite like the other. Since some of them have been in game for a really long time, I'm always impressed at how they've grown and changed because of the City, but still stay true to their canon personalities, too. That's just impressive writing on your part.

And you know I'd love to plot =3

AND THEN FORTY SEVEN THOUSAND YEARS LATER hi you are nice and i like you.

I was thinking I'd like Isaak and Jimmy to chat more. How would you feel about Uncle Mob Boss buying him a drink?

Isaak wants to know what fun illegal things might be going down, he's getting bored...

Hi you are nice and I like you too.

Yes, I think Isaak and Jimmy definitely need to chat more. This time with less broken fingers!

Tons of fun illegal things, come chill with Jimmy and find out.

GROOVY.

Then, maybe some time which is not right now because fml i need to go to sleep soon, he will call him and invite him out for a drink. ;3

Player name: Ellie
Characters played:

GINNY WEASLEY | harry potter |

hexuality | ∆

Personal concrit link: See above.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Not allowed, nor encouraged. But I'm very approachable!
Other comments?

This chunk of time has simultaneously been the happiest and saddest Ginny's been in a while, which I'm very aware of, and so I tried to balance it all as best I could. She's hitting 5 years in the City this December so I've been trying to write that in and how it's affecting her without getting to be too overwhelming. Just a little insight, I guess, if you were wondering what all was going on with her recently! But she's also got some really great things coming her way, and Christmas always brightens her up, so things will be better. ♥

Also, I'm sorry if I haven't been super on top of things! I've been busy with moving to a new city and getting a new job and all that entails. You know I love you guys!

Player name: S.
Characters played:
Marguerite Gautier :: Lady of the Camellias ::

luxuryflower
Lilith :: Lucifer's Tears ::

onlydancing
Personal concrit link: Marguerite & Lilith
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Anonymous comments allowed. IP logging off. Both accounts.
Other comments?

I know that I 1) haven't been very active with Marguerite the past week (blame it on post-assignment stress) and 2) haven't introduced Lilith ICly yet (this will probably happen tomorrow), but I'm completely open to feedback of any kind, so please let me know how I'm doing so I can either keep it up or make the necessary changes. ♥

So in the big scheme of things I definitely haven't been RPing with you super long, which is why it makes it that much more impressive how much you've managed to make me care about Marguerite in such a short amount of time. I can always really feel your passion for her character, and everything you write her saying or doing just seems so natural and so well done. I really have to say, I enjoy the hell out of our CR, and hope for much more of it in the future. And I'm sure that when you introduce Lilith, I will enjoy her just as much! So basically, keep up the good work -- I don't see changes that need to be made so much as a character that's interesting as hell, which is awesome.

Tasha, you're the best. I'm so glad you're enjoying our CR as much as I am. I look forward to seeing where Marguerite's and Meyer's relation will go and to have many more opportunities to play with you in the future. December is going to be the best. ♥ And yes, I really hope you will enjoy Lilith as much as you do Marguerite. I love her just as much as a character, close to my heart as she is. Thank you so much for your thoughts, they made my night!

Player name: Mary
Characters played: Nall :: Lunar-universe ::

dragonofalthena

Personal concrit link: HMD

Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes (anon on, IP off, comments screened, although if it's something I need to ask about and it's anon, it'll get unscreened)

Other comments?

I know Nall's only been in a couple of days and is kind of obscure, but still, I welcome feedback and questions.

Player name: Rae
Characters played:
Dr. James Wilson • House, MD •

dr_conscience
Todd Anderson • Dead Poets Society •

mumbled_truth
Dewey • Malcolm in the Middle •

thefavorite
Harry Kim • Star Trek: Voyager •

valedictory

Personal concrit link: aquí
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed
Other comments? So I know I haven't been active this month - technically, I'm on hiatus, but because I'm bad at hiatus, I've been backtagging and slowtagging around a bit anyway. Whoops.

I'm pretty sure you're aware that I love your characters, specifically Dewey and Wilson, because that's who I've had the most CR with, but I'll say it again anyway. I know you've been on hiatus this month, so we haven't tagged as much lately, but one thing I wanna say is that I love how distinct all the voices of your characters are. Even when your characters have similarities, you manage to keep them all feeling really different and interesting, and that's not easy. So, essentially, you rock, and when you're back from hiatus, I demand many more opportunities to tag with you ;)

THERE WILL BE MUCH MORE TAGGING ABSOLUTELY

You are wonderful and too kind to me and thank you. You are always a total delight to play with, as are your guys. And we absolutely need more CR because we have characters that don't have CR that must be fixed. ♥

So yes. We will do all the things please.

Player name: Kippur
Characters played:
Theodred Sammeth :: Original (Dawn of the Old Gods)::

deadmanbusiness
Laruna Troven :: Original (Element Wizard Chronicles) ::

water_wine_wizard
Personal concrit link: Right here.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: If you must.
Other comments?

Player name: Sarah
Characters played: Bucky Barnes :: Captain America: The First Avenger ::

yourbestguysgun
Stiles :: Teen Wolf ::

studmuffin
Personal concrit link: I have crit posts on each of the journals but don't worry, I don't bite.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: If you'd like.
Other comments? I have been in such a rut lately so I want to apologise about that. If you have any issues/advice etc feel free to be open and honest.

Player name: Sass/Kim/some other thing you want to call me
Characters played: Toshiko Sato:: Torchwood::

sorted
Personal concrit link: Here
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes, and comments are screened until I unscreen them
Other comments? I've been so slow, and I'm insanely behind, and so so sorry. It's also possible I may have lost some notifications. :(

Where do I even start?! I just really enjoy the CR we've developed, and I hope to have the chance for much much more in the future. Your voice for Tosh is just spot on, and I can hear her speaking in every tag you do. I know things have been a little slow for you lately, but don't worry too much! It happens, and you'll get back into the swing of things in no time. And everyone pretty much loves backtags, and I love your tags in general. Can't wait to see what more you have in store for Tosh and to have more opportunities to play stuff out with you. You're awesome.

Tosh just got here, but I love that she has landed on her feet and is already networking and establishing herself. I'm really looking forward to seeing her flourish in the City and how exactly that will play out/what she has in store. You sound so enthusiastic when you brainstorm and that kind of thing is pretty damn contagious. I love it. Here's to hoping that we can thread all the things when you are feeling up to it. c:

Go at your own speed-- life definitely happens. We'll all be here when you have the time and the energy.

Player name: Mai
Characters played:
Mercy Thompson :: Mercy Thompson series ::

coyote_walking
Rain:: OC ::

livingmyths

Personal concrit link: Each of my girls has one stickied.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: No, thanks. But I'm happy for anything constructive anyone may have.
Other comments? Life's been insane, so I haven't been around as much as I wanted. I'm working on that though and I'll always return tags promptly!

Player name: Vee
Characters played:
Carla Morir :: Original Character ::

dignity_misery
Tallendi Morrison :: Original Character ::

sociomonere
Personal concrit link: Carla has one on her journal, can be used for both if you want.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed, not necessarily encouraged.
Other comments? My activity has kind of sucked lately. Burnt out both RP-wise and real life-wise. Technically on hiatus until after my finals, unlikely to be tagging new things until then. Otherwise, I am always game for concrit on the characters.

Player name: Emma
Characters played: Clint Barton :: Marvel Cinematic Universe ::

bettercallit
Personal concrit link: Here
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed, but not really encouraged - I don't bite, I swear
Other comments? November's been full of fail with medical stuff and general life issues, so I hope I can be forgiven, and I'll admit after losing CR the last few months or so, I've been a little discouraged with RP in general. So if there's anything anyone wants to put out there, I'd appreciate the honesty, and I'm always open to suggestions and advice.

Player name: Em
Characters played: Jim Kirk | Star Trek |

hischair
Personal concrit link: voila
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: No, thank you, but I'm always open to constructive crit!
Other comments? Very busy atm but if it's okay with you then I'll be backtagging things while the season explodes with activity irl. He's going to have a quiet Christmas and New Year, so no more parties for the moment, but let me know if you want him in a minor supporting role to any of your plots and I'll have him look in. He's always somehow the central focus and I'd like to have him more on the sidelines/helping out to balance that. o/

Player name: tamzin
Characters played: kathryn janeway | star trek: voyager (

directives)
Personal concrit link: ♛
Anonymous allowed/encouraged, Y/N: not encouraged, but there if you need it!
Other comments: i live a very busy #teacherproblems life, so i don't always have time to tag or get involved in all the things i'd like to.

Player name: Veda

Characters played:
Pavel Andreievich Chekov :: Nu!Trek ::

candothat
Penny :: Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog ::

anunluckypenny

Personal concrit link: Present in every character journal!
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed, but not so much encouraged.

Other comments? Sorry about the recent lack of being around; I'm trying to finish NaNoWriMo and I was hideously behind, so... I kind of had to ground myself from the internet. I'll be around again after I'm done and recuperate a bit. Oh! You can be honest, too. I can take it. Let me know if I'm doing anything particularly well, too, so I can try to keep doing it.

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H. M. D.?!

Caru

Mici

Princess Cupcake

Tasha

to the most awesome, the most understanding and the most patient Tasha

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Mary

Rae

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Kippur

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Sass/Kim

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Mai

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Em

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