player name: jesse
characters played:

Naminé | Kingdom Hearts | copulae
Wesley Wyndam-Pryce | Angel | discessum

personal concrit link: (http://bedeviling.livejournal.com/1569.html)
anonymous allowed/encouraged?: Allowed, for certain, since I know it's sometimes easier to get the message across. I encourage people to be willing to come to me openly, though. I'd never get mad at someone for having honest crit.
other comments? Currently I'm sort of struggling on directions to take with both Naminé and Wesley. It's not that I'm having trouble writing their character, but I struggle with letting them find their 'place' in the City, so to speak, so any suggestions on that would be especially helpful.