http://robot-mod.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] robot-mod.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] thatrainbowcity2009-11-27 03:01 am

HMD [A - K]

HMD [A - K]

Those who gave their names or nicknames on their applications and the Taken Character List as starting with A through K, please post here.


How's My Driving?
[PROCEED]


IT'S HERE, IT'S HERE! HMD, HMD! HOW'S MY DRIVING? PRETTY GOOD, RIGHT? AREN'T YOU THANKFUL?! GOBBLE IT UP, POLYCHROMATIDS~!!

Welcome back to our more seasoned members, and welcome to you first-timers.

HMD is the gamewide chance for feedback on playing here in [livejournal.com profile] polychromatic.

And here's our philosophy on HMD: praise--it's all well and good (we all love it, yeah?), so if you want to give praise, love, ♥s, whatever, go for it! It's especially great to say what you ♥ so much about a character. For example, how they acted during X curse or Y plot was great, or how they adjusted (or didn't?) to the City was fascinating. But we all know, constructive crit is best when you're looking for advice on how to improve. What we really encourage here are questions. It gives you the chance to maybe understand something, (and maybe you think it makes sense after all now), and the player a chance to explain. For example:

"How did Gary get from Point A in canon to Point B in Poly? It didn't quite make sense to me."

"What started this whole fascination of Sue's with the bananas?"

And then you find out that there's a long, involved story that goes back six months involving the aftermath of a curse, a lizard, a pound of potatoes, a watermelon, three French maids, and a pogo stick. And then it all makes perfect sense.

Or perhaps it doesn't, but you've started a dialogue about the things you perceive versus the things the player perceives.

As decided by community vote, anon is not allowed here on the main HMD post, and IP logging is on. Sorry, Anon. However, we encourage posting a link to your own, personal, anon-enabled crit thread(s) if allowing anon is something you want to do and are comfortable with. But keep in mind that we moderators can't police those crit threads: not only are they anon, but they are on your own journals, and there are dozens of them. But we entreat members of this game to be polite and courteous, logged in or not. We will be watching the main post for any unrest, however, so keep that in mind. (We like to watch.) Let's all keep ourselves like civilized people, and have a decent time. Remember, no road rage in HMD.

To keep things organized, please post your comment in the following format*:




The general disclaimer, as usual, applies:

By choosing to post here on HMD, you may receive comments you don't necessarily enjoy. By posting here, you accept that this could happen, and you're basically okay with it. We will be monitoring this post for abuse and will shut down any instances of abuse we see. However, constructive crit, comments, or questions you just don't like do not count as abuse.

Whew. Now that that's all out of the way, have at it, [livejournal.com profile] polychromatic!

*Please remember our requests regarding sparkles, images, embedded media, and other bits of coding. A little variation on the comment form is fine and tasty, and putting things like gifs or videos behind links or in collapsed threads is fine too, but please consider the loading time for others with slower connections. And take it easy on the placeholders: HMD isn't going anywhere.

And because it's apparently traditional for HMD posts to go up in the middle of the damn night, here we are. =_=v

[identity profile] ignipotent.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Audrey
Characters played:

Amory Felix | [livejournal.com profile] fatespoken | Original Character [✁] (http://fatespoken.livejournal.com/8306.html?mode=reply)
Suou Pavlichenko | [livejournal.com profile] sapanwood | Darker than Black [✁] (http://sapanwood.livejournal.com/418.html?mode=reply)
Tristan Thorn | [livejournal.com profile] gazingup | Stardust [✁] (http://gazingup.livejournal.com/983.html?mode=reply)
Kinomoto Sakura | [livejournal.com profile] bealright | Cardcaptor Sakura [✁] (http://bealright.livejournal.com/33549.html?mode=reply)

Personal concrit link: All the ✁'s
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes.
Other comments? I know Sakura's activity (or inactivity, to be exact) is a problem, but I'm going to try my best to see if I can improve by next month. If not, I'll let her go.

[identity profile] misterblackbird.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:03 am (UTC)(link)
First in war, first in peace, first on the HMD thread.

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[identity profile] misterblackbird.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:02 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Icarus (called Caru)
Characters played:
♛ Cain Hargreaves || Godchild || [livejournal.com profile] misterblackbird
♖ Benjamin Franklin "Hawkeye" Pierce || M*A*S*H || [livejournal.com profile] dr_foodsniffler
♚ Alice [Liddell?] || Alice's Adventures in Wonderland || [livejournal.com profile] othersideofwhat
♘ Edmund Pevensie || The Chronicles of Narnia || [livejournal.com profile] justredemption

Personal concrit link: (http://misterblackbird.livejournal.com/29473.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes and yes.
Other comments? Ask me questions, tell me things. I'm glad of any comments, questions, remarks, advice, suggestions, thoughts, radio transmissions, or smoke signals regarding this quartet (how did I get so many?). I always get inspired after HMD--for whatever reason, it always makes me want to play more. I'm glad of any feedback at all. Let me know what you think.
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[identity profile] a-silent-due.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:53 am (UTC)(link)
I actually think I've been seen a bit more of Cain's bite lately (or maybe it's just that Kanda invites it XDDDD), which makes me really happy, because that's the only thing I fear re: characters who've been in the City for a while - just how strongly acclimation will have dulled their original personality. I'm liking Cain's progress here.

Iiiiiiiiiiii selfishly wish there were a bit more of Hawkeye around? ;o; I think you're doing nicely with him, and I do enjoy seeing my favourite characters played nicely ;; (2)

I think that honestly, as an overall, the only crit I can bring you is that sometimes your character voices can blend a very little bit. It's not a very strong feeling, but I think it might not hurt to experiment a bit more with language patterns - perhaps not make them all as longwinded, or introduce certain verbal ticks? It might just be me, tho!

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[identity profile] youdeservedit.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:03 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Jane

Characters played:
Kaoru Hitachiin | Ouran High School Host Club | [livejournal.com profile] ourdenouement
Natalia Luzu Kimlasca Lanvaldear | Tales of the Abyss | [livejournal.com profile] imperialwill
Yuri Lowell | Tales of Vesperia | [livejournal.com profile] notflynn
Nagi Naoe | Weiss Kruez | [livejournal.com profile] brbmindbullets
Yuki Sohma | Fruits Basket | [livejournal.com profile] youdeservedit

Personal concrit link: Here ♥ (http://ottavo.livejournal.com/3355.html?mode=reply)~
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y

Other comments? I'm going to ask you to smell your armpits. That's the smell of failure and it's stinking up my office.
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I'm about to projectile express myself all over your Hush Puppies.

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[identity profile] treadingdawn.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Bon
Characters played:
Caspian X :: The Chronicles of Narnia :: [livejournal.com profile] treadingdawn
Aslan :: The Chronicles of Narnia :: [livejournal.com profile] nevertame
Prince Nuada :: Hellboy: The Golden Army :: [livejournal.com profile] unseenprince

I dropped these guys but feel free to crit them too.

Adrian Veidt :: Watchmen :: [livejournal.com profile] caughtthebullet
Severen :: Near Dark :: [livejournal.com profile] keepingoddhours

Personal concrit link: Here. (http://silvernaofficer.livejournal.com/277.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed.
Other comments? ARRRRRRRRRRRP.

[identity profile] velvetevoker.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
Wow I haven't tagged any of your guys in a while ;_; I'll have to remedy that sometime. Get Caspian that dashing haircut. WAY BACK WHEN tagging him with Edmund was awesome, though. With the house log and all. And I will forever associate hair nets with Caspian, whether he likes it or not.

SEVEREN bawww sad to see him go. It was very fun tagging with him while it lasted. Keep on sparkling, vampire boy.

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❤ meet me on the equinox

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CHIQUI

[identity profile] worthier.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:04 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Chiqui
Characters played: [livejournal.com profile] denyinurgod ★ Gundam 00 • [livejournal.com profile] inurveda ★ Gundam 00
Personal concrit link: gundaaaam (http://denyinurgod.livejournal.com/3687.html?mode=reply) • dat couch (http://inurveda.livejournal.com/703.html?mode=reply)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Fire away.
Other comments? Posting on her behalf. Praise or crit, she'll appreciate either when she gets back from spelunking in caves as Batman.

[identity profile] notflynn.livejournal.com 2009-11-28 05:10 am (UTC)(link)
I haven't seen G00 in a year.

BUT AHH could not imagine a better Setsuna. How do you find so many things to do for such a ":|||" character?

/goes to rewatch and finish S2...someday.

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ALEX

[identity profile] primrosella.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:06 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Alex
Characters played:
Rosella (http://i669.photobucket.com/albums/vv60/Fortunes_Wings/Polychromatic/BossScreenRosella.jpg) | King's Quest | [livejournal.com profile] primrosella
Proto (http://i669.photobucket.com/albums/vv60/Fortunes_Wings/Polychromatic/BossScreenProto.jpg) | Mega Man (Cartoon) | [livejournal.com profile] proto_typing

Other comments? Sweet, sweet HMD, how I've missed you. ♥

Right, so, I love answering questions and I have a penchant for tl;dr, so by all means, if there's something you're curious about or interested in (or just want to hear me ramble), feel free to ask! Just don't ask me to write a sestina.

[identity profile] a-silent-due.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 09:04 am (UTC)(link)
I'm enjoying the opportunity to see actual bitterness / grudge / more than the comical infuriated puff from Rosella! It might be that I've just missed out on prior instances of her showing these feelings, but I'm relishing in that aspect of her now. Adds a certain dimension to her, at least for me.
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[identity profile] chibidl.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:06 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Chi
Characters played:
Clow Reed | CardCaptor Sakura | [livejournal.com profile] i_themagician
Guru Clef | Magic Knight Rayearth | [livejournal.com profile] conductyourself
Nanako Kuroi | Lucky Star | [livejournal.com profile] notaleftover
Personal concrit link: It's in Clow's journal somewhere fjdkafjlas whatever no one uses it.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: N. Anon is enabled, but IP logging is turned on. Don't be a pansy.
Other comments? I think I'm doing pretty well with my peeps, lately, except for an all-around lack of inspiration/activity following September. So I'm expecting some pretty hard-hitting crit, therefore. Set me straight, Poly!

[identity profile] a-silent-due.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 09:09 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmmmm, I think one thing I'd like to see more of would be the proactive side of Clow. It feels as if sometimes he's missing a slightly srs bsnss, "Chill in your bloody shoes, the Clow Reed is in the house (foo')" edge to him. I'm glad to still see him around! Byakuya would approve :( b

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[identity profile] velvetevoker.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:08 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Cass
Characters played:

Sgt Donny Donowitz ~ Inglourious Basterds ~ [livejournal.com profile] thebearjew

Personal concrit link: Here (http://thebearjew.livejournal.com/2717.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes
Other comments? Bear Jew Fact: The Bear Jew read Lady Gaga’s poker face.
thenormalsquint: ([Angela]: lab tested. angela approved.)

[personal profile] thenormalsquint 2009-11-27 09:06 am (UTC)(link)
SOB I WANNA BE ABLE TO READ GAGA'S POKER FACE TOO.

But seriously, I love tagging Donny with Angela for no good reason. It's fun and while she doesn't want to hear about the grody details, she doesn't think he's exactly wrong for head-smashing some Nazis. Oh, btw, I really do want him to cut her hair one day lol

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BRITT

[identity profile] floralities.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:11 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Britt!
Characters played:
Kurosaki Ichigo | BLEACH | [livejournal.com profile] strawberried
Yamanaka Ino | NARUTO | [livejournal.com profile] boobsorgtfo
Personal concrit link: Stickied to the top of each journal.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Whatever floats your boat. /o/
Other comments? HAPPY NOW, JANE? 8( I will think of all your WONDERFUL, SUPER SPECIAL COMMENTS while I'm working tomorrow today.

...I'm going back to bed now.

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Damn, I am so good.

/tucks you back in

Okay, for serious business commenting- I don't remember much about Ino from the 30-something chapters I read like six years ago. But damn do you make me want to read it all just for her. She's fabulous and such an HBIC. Though she seems like she's all ~*regular teenager*~ you don't let us forget that she's a ninja, too. And totally bamf.

I WILL NEVER NOT SHIP IT.

And, god, I've always admired your Ichigo, even from before we met. I'm really enjoying his interaction with Natalia so far ;;
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[identity profile] swordmastering.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Kay
Characters played: Leon Magnus:: Tales of Destiny :: [livejournal.com profile] roseofseingald
Personal concrit link: Here~ (http://fabulousfrills.livejournal.com/861.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y~
Other comments? brb slapping Jane's ass
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♥~

You know I love Leon, and you're one of the reasons he's my favorite. I DON'T KNOW DESTINY OUTSIDE OF THE MANGA, but I will rectify that someday.

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Chelle

[personal profile] dreamsofnoah 2009-11-27 08:41 am (UTC)(link)
Player name: Chelle
Characters played:
Road Camelot :: D.Gray-man :: [livejournal.com profile] dreamsofnoah
Christopher Chant :: Chrestomanci :: [livejournal.com profile] iknowmore
Doll :: Kuroshitsuji :: [livejournal.com profile] freckleddoll
Personal concrit link: Here
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed but not encouraged, I find non-anon crit easier to reply to. And I promise I don't bite!
Other comments? Questions and crit all welcome :>

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I am canonically compelled to inform you that I hate you and all of yours (but Doll is so cute omg ;; the entry when she realized Beast's departure still breaks my heart T_T )

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[identity profile] der-freischuetz.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 12:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Player name: Alexis

Characters played: Rip van Winkle :: Hellsing :: [livejournal.com profile] der_freischuetz
Personal concrit link: Here (http://der-freischuetz.livejournal.com/991.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged?: Comments are auto-screened and I think anonymous is allowed, too. But I'd definitely prefer non-anonymous. Rip might bite, I do not.

Other comments?: She's not undercover anymore and soon to be captured. Quite a change from last time -- have a question, have a suggestion? Open for everything~.

XISLEIN.

[identity profile] lanoyee.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
AS YOU KNOW I know next to nothing about Hellsing, and even less about Rip, but. I enjoyed what interaction we had (family curse omg) and really like her smug amusement. Will be looking forward to what happens to her next.

AND AND I'm happy you're having so much fun at Poly. >)

Keep it up.

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Clara~

[identity profile] missranktwo.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Player name: Clara
Characters played:
Koizumi Risa :: Lovely Complex :: [livejournal.com profile] jumbo_gal
Tao Ren :: Shaman King :: [livejournal.com profile] tongari_shaman
Hanazono Hikari :: Special A :: [livejournal.com profile] missranktwo
Tsubaki Nakatsukasa :: Soul Eater :: [livejournal.com profile] mytechskeeper
Personal concrit link: Risa's (http://jumbo-gal.livejournal.com/8829.html), Ren's (http://tongari-shaman.livejournal.com/4664.html), Hikari's (http://missranktwo.livejournal.com/704.html) and Tsubaki's (http://mytechskeeper.livejournal.com/638.html).
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Anon is enabled in my concrit posts.
Other comments? Apart from my hiatus meaning little activity the last few weeks, anything that can help me improve is welcone, thanks everyone. <3

Re: Clara~

[identity profile] aibyoukaonigiri.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 04:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Clara~! Hullo you. You know, until a recent post with his girlfriend I didn't realize Ren was together with Misao. I thought it was really cute and have been trying to follow them a bit more now. I'm also so happy that you have another cast member for Tsubaki again! That's absolutely great!

I'd like to try and poke Risa a bit more with Yuuki, maybe. I think I always say that. /fail

But because of stuff going down with new canon mates in the city she'll probably be moving soon. So >< I WILL get better at poking her before then. And always, I enjoy Hikari and Tohru's friendship.

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[identity profile] innate.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 02:08 pm (UTC)(link)
player name: jesse
characters played:

Naminé | Kingdom Hearts | [livejournal.com profile] copulae
Wesley Wyndam-Pryce | Angel | [livejournal.com profile] discessum

personal concrit link: (http://bedeviling.livejournal.com/1569.html)
anonymous allowed/encouraged?: Allowed, for certain, since I know it's sometimes easier to get the message across. I encourage people to be willing to come to me openly, though. I'd never get mad at someone for having honest crit.
other comments? Currently I'm sort of struggling on directions to take with both Naminé and Wesley. It's not that I'm having trouble writing their character, but I struggle with letting them find their 'place' in the City, so to speak, so any suggestions on that would be especially helpful.

[identity profile] aibyoukaonigiri.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm not familiar with either of the canon's. But I'll often find myself reading your Namine. I am only familiar with her through interactions at another Role play, but I enjoy reading the way you portray her.

I really have to play Kingdom Hearts some day. -_-

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Player name: Lulu
Characters played: Di Di Rich :: The Riches :: [livejournal.com profile] bufferprincess
Personal concrit link: none right now
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N:
Other comments? She is used to staying out of the way of buffers, but is trying to come into her own. In Canon it is said she wants to be a doctor or a lawyer. I have had her reading up on medical books so she can try to become a doctor. Really is a dream since they will most likely be caught in their fake lives one day, but while Di Di is in the city I thought it would be a good way for her to at lest interact more with other characters.

[identity profile] moresake.livejournal.com 2009-11-28 07:34 am (UTC)(link)
Di Di~

How she puts up with Gwendolen all the time I do not know. I think you're doing a pretty good job with her, though I don't know her canon. I would like to give you the advice of doing a little spellcheck/grammarcheck before you post or comment, though-- you do end up with a lot of typos. But even so, I'm quite pleased with the roommate I just randomly grabbed. XD

[identity profile] notaspure.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 02:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Player name: Debs
Characters played:

Teito Klein | [livejournal.com profile] notaspure | 07-Ghost
Hiro Sohma | [livejournal.com profile] deresforkisa | Fruits Basket

Personal concrit link: Teito's (http://notaspure.livejournal.com/740.html) and Hiro's (http://deresforkisa.livejournal.com/495.html).
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes! Definitely.
Other comments? I know that I need to get more active with Hiro already, and I'm gonna work on improving it next month. 8) Also, I love crit and getting better, so! If you think there's something a bit off, I want to hear what you have to say.
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[identity profile] aibyoukaonigiri.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I really love your Hiro though. He's so cute and mega fun to play against. He's just such a smart ass. I think after recently events it will be fun to see how he differs a little bit around Tohru.

You're doing a great job with him. I can't think of anything constructive to say. Just keep up the good work!

And I've only seen like....three or four episodes of 07-Ghost. But it was something I meant to continue watching and or read. So maybe some time soon I'll be able to pick that up again.

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[identity profile] 7thborn.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Player name: Ellie.
Characters played:

Captain Holly Short | [livejournal.com profile] captainshort | Artemis Fowl | [# (http://captainshort.livejournal.com/47127.html?mode=reply)]
Ginny Weasley | [livejournal.com profile] 7thborn | Harry Potter | [# (http://7thborn.livejournal.com/605.html?mode=reply)]

Personal concrit link: See the #'s!
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Sure.
Other comments? I've been having issues with Holly lately and I know it shows. My troubles with activity and not having a laptop certainly didn't help the matter - and if I can't get out of that rut, well... it may very well be time to say goodbye to the police elf. In more cheerful news, I finally have a new laptop so you'll be seeing me around more often again!
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narnian: (♕ blue and red [gleek])

[personal profile] narnian 2009-11-27 08:44 pm (UTC)(link)
I do not know ..........Holly.....weep?! I'M SORRY T.T;;;;

Oh hai Weasley, sup?

I'VE SAID THIS BEFORE AND I'LL SAY IT AGAIN, you've taken Ginny and fleshed her out in a way that both sits well with canon but makes her MORE THAN SHE WAS GIVEN IN THE TEXT ITSELF, which in turn makes her not only likable but someone I truly enjoy interacting with on multiple levels. THANK YOU for this, and I applaud the consistency of her voice especially. Whether she is cursed or regular or what-have-you, it always sounds like GINNY. ❤

❤!

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Player name: B/k
Characters played: Hiyori Tamura :: Lucky * Star :: [livejournal.com profile] doujin_dork :: Concrit (http://doujin-dork.livejournal.com/661.html)
Demyx :: Kingdom Hearts :: [livejournal.com profile] sitaronthewater :: Concrit (http://sitaronthewater.livejournal.com/758.html)
Captain Hammer :: Doctor Horrible’s Sing-Along Blog :: [livejournal.com profile] horrible_protag :: Concrit (http://horrible-protag.livejournal.com/709.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Should be allowed, encouraged, eh. Would rather be logged in so that we can discuss it in more detail. I swear I don’t bite, and I super-swear that you won’t offend me.
Other comments? I like crit, and I can’t improve unless you give me some, if you feel something’s off even if you don’t know canon, that’s fine, yadda yadda yadda. Other’n that I got nothing other than the cornbread recipe I use works a lot better when put to use as muffins. Hope those that celebrated had a happy turkey day~!

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I really need to play Kingdom Hearts so that I can be familiar with your characters a bit more. *crais*

And Hiyori <3

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Player name: Kitten
Characters played:

Kobato Hanato :: Kobato :: [livejournal.com profile] its_kobato
Tohru Honda :: Fruits Basket :: [livejournal.com profile] aibyoukaonigiri
Yuuki Kurosu :: Vampire Knight :: [livejournal.com profile] guardianhime

Personal concrit link: Kobato (http://its-kobato.livejournal.com/4037.html), Tohru (http://aibyoukaonigiri.livejournal.com/4058.html), Yuuki (http://guardianhime.livejournal.com/12349.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: It's allowed. =)
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Tohru is so sweet. I stalk her posts just a little and the gentle, kind girl from the manga really shines through in every one. She's lovely. <3

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Player name: Eri
Characters played:
Lorne | Angel | [livejournal.com profile] deformiwhats
Priestly | Ten Inch Hero | [livejournal.com profile] notverypriestly

Personal concrit link: Lorne (http://deformiwhats.livejournal.com/1357.html) / Priestly (http://notverypriestly.livejournal.com/1659.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y
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SRS BSNS

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First of all, I want you to MARVEL at the fact that I am NOT going *flails all over your face*

*clears throat* This is SRS BSNS time.

Lorne: I think you do a fantastic job with Lorne. So much of the time when he's written people get tied up in the Angelcakes and Babydoll etc etc and you don't really get any of *Lorne* in there. You manage to strike a really nice balance between all the outlandishness of him and yet still give him a sort of grounded-ness. I've talked to you before with other characters about how you do this amazing balance thing with all your guys so that they're really rounded. You do the same thing here with Lorne.

Priestly: Okay, now marvel at my restraint because you KNOW how much I love the multicolored retard. It is very hard for me not to just squeal like a girl. With Priestly, you took this kind of two dimensional, outlandish, sweet, idiot from the movie and really have completely and utterly turned him into someone with layers and a history and all kinds of *real* qualities because it would be so very easy for Priestly to just be a caricature. You've fleshed him out totally and while I adore all of your guys to bits, he's easily my favorite one.

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Player name: Kristi
Characters played: Inara Serra :: Firefly :: [livejournal.com profile] only_fell
Personal concrit link: here! (http://only-fell.livejournal.com/38745.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y
Other comments? Inara is played in Poly PRE Serenity (the movie)

psh, SRS BSNS, what!?

[identity profile] zombitard.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 05:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Overall, Inara is a comprehensive character and you pull her off so well. By that I mean that everything she does matches everything she feels and is thinking. How she speaks, how she reacts, how she dresses; the fact that she's so openly calculated leaves little to play with within that character except even without curses you seem to find a way to do that as well.

You're aware of her biggest flaws and are very okay with playing them out. The control issues, the extreme Mal baggage, etc. You also play to her strengths, of course, but I think the fact that you're okay with taking this perfect companion and making her more than that? How you insist she's a teacher more than anything, I love the hell out of that.

Inara was never my favorite character in the series, but she's so close to Kaylee on my list now, and it's your fault. As far as something for you to improve on? I'm drawing a blank. I'll tell you what I'd like to see, instead. I'd LOVE to see her be pushed out of her comfort zone more by her friends in the City. Some titles might be: Inara Plays Paintball, Inara and the Moped, Inara Wears Denim, Inara and the Very Large Super Messy Funtastic Food Fight.

okay so I got a little away from srs bsns there but I still mean it all ♥

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[personal profile] gossamerrain 2009-11-27 06:02 pm (UTC)(link)
Why is HMD always after the worst (activitywise) month of every quarter for me. sob.

Player name: Alms
Characters played: Brian Moser :: Dexter :: [livejournal.com profile] cold_dry_pieces
Allison Cameron :: House M.D. :: [livejournal.com profile] as_damaged
Neil Perry :: Dead Poets Society :: [livejournal.com profile] had_not_lived
Personal concrit link: pinned on all journals
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Allowed but not encouraged
Other comments? I am going to have to, um, reclaim Brian, I know. what can I say, having his whole cast on hiatus quelled my inspiration, idk.
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[personal profile] mumbled_truth 2009-11-27 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Go away I hate you.

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[identity profile] basstardchuck.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 06:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Player name: Cala
Characters played: Chuck Bass :: Gossip Girl :: [livejournal.com profile] basstardchuck
Anthony Rutherford :: OC :: [livejournal.com profile] coffeenspeed
Personal concrit link: here (http://coffeenspeed.livejournal.com/1347.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: I have no idea how to check that
Other comments? I've been hiatus almost entire November, I know. But if you feel like yelling at me for certain decision I made when bringing back characters, here's your chance :P

[identity profile] alittlewild.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 07:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I should get this over with. Shalimar will be inviting Thomas to join the we hate Cala club. I hate you. Well not really...Moving on.

Chuck makes me want to watch Gossip Girl. I hate you for that, I can't watch shows like that, it makes me cry inside. They're all teen and angsty and no. I can't. I will resist forever.

Anthony is someone I can say things about though. So often you get OC that are somewhat inconsistent. They're generally hard to predict, which is bad because characters should have at least a small degree of predictability. I mean in the "my character wouldn't tell your character this because they are pretty sure they'd react this way" form. But Anthony does. His reactions have been consistent and so have his opinions and the way he acts. He's also very real. I like that he's not from a super-powered world and doesn't have any abilities but he's still really interesting and fun.

I am curious as to why he didn't really freak out after he was told about the City, was it because people seemed to actually know him and that made it easier to accept?

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[identity profile] innocentxcharm.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Player name: Kestrel
Characters played:
Florian :: Tales of the Abyss :: [livejournal.com profile] innocentxcharm
Luc :: Suikoden :: [livejournal.com profile] wind_magic
Personal concrit link: Here! (http://innocentxcharm.livejournal.com/26677.html) I'll make one for Luc eventually.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes
Other comments? I have the feeling I've been sorta inactive lately. Gonna work on that. Aside from that, feel free to say anything!
dreamsofnoah: (Road - [cute] cute as a button)

[personal profile] dreamsofnoah 2009-11-27 10:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Florian is so cute! I miss being able to play with him with Hunny. I'm afraid I don't know his canon, but you've always played him as consistently adorable and I love that :>

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Player name: Griffin
Characters played: Mao :: Darker than Black :: [livejournal.com profile] straycontract
Personal concrit link: Here (http://straycontract.livejournal.com/1486.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y
Other comments? I've been extremely fail with getting him out and tagging, but if you have crit of any kind I'd love to hear it. Or if you'd like me to tag you. There's still a lot of "jadlkf new RP" nerves going on.

[identity profile] worksmart.livejournal.com 2009-11-27 10:19 pm (UTC)(link)
I think Chase should meet a squirrel. JSYK.

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