Okayyy, let me see what I can manage. I still don't know Hammer or Hiyori, but for Demyx - I think the only recommendation I can make is for you to play the new canon. Or check up on game scripts! I can help you with transcribing if you can't find sources elsewhere. \o\ Apparently in canon he's a lot... lazier than you've made him, more obliviously selfish (in that sort of "o waow, I GUESS I SHOULD BE GLAD I DIDN'T GO TO CASTLE OBLIVION, too bad that guy you hung out with a lot died there, Roxas. :'D"), a lot less positively invested in the Organization.

I'd... still like to see a bit more flail and exaggerated reactions from him in the meantime, I guess, is a non-new-canon related crit? A little more of the "oh man" element, somewhat more clueless, instead of this practicality, since... I've never seen Demyx as the practical type. For example, taking his pumpkin patch post! He sort of went straightforwardly to the main question instead of adopting a more "hey! hey, what's going on?" Which I wouldn't have expected. I hope that makes sense at all. |D