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The Form:
<b>Player name:</b> <b>Characters played:</b> Character :: Fandom :: Character LJ <b>Personal concrit link:</b> <b>Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N:</b> <b>Other comments?</b>

To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of the HMD comments on this post here below for easy reference.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex I [Rosella, Finnick] Alms [Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy] Ara [Nick] Arwing [Garrus, Lockdown, Gin, Vincente] Ary [Raphael] Ashley [Fran] Audrey [Edward, Amory, Ben] B/k [Hiyori, Demyx, Capt. Hammer, Angua] Bon [Caspian, Mr. Orange, Shira] Brent [Kazari] Caru [Cain, Maria, TMWNN] Catharine [Jezebel] Cella [Haru, Mae] Chibi/Tona [Cameron, Amy, Tessa] Dawn [Mara, Cinna, Haji] Duet [Yeager] Ellie [Ginny] Eri [Castiel, Faith, Donna] Faith [Fred] Felicity [Genesis] Gorse [Jade] Haunt [Euphemia]	Illu [Belphegor, Akito/Agito] Jane [Yuri, Hope, Hitagi] Jansen [Tenth Doctor] Jei [Neil, TARDIS] Jules [Mukuro] Juni [Snake] Kestrel [Florian, Luc] KGaara/Yuki [Aion, Klarth] Kristi [Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Spencer, Ryan, Rose, Myrnin] Laura [William] Leah [Campbell, Rory, Eridan] Lee [Huey] Lief [Guy, Sodia] Lila [Tyr] Lisa [Dawn, Derek, Jill] Lucie [Lenalee, Nana] Luna Quiche [Kohaku] Lysoke [Jack, Cassian] Maddie [Jamie, Kururu] Marion [Stephen, Dulcie, George] Mary [Claire] Melon [Saya] Mici [Eden, Saya, Billy, Edmund, Lucy, Kenny, Peeta, Mr. Pink, Capt. America] Molly [Susan, House, Mr. White] Muffin [Sakura] Nyte [Piglet, Rido] Pixie [Nathan]	Rae[Wilson, Todd] Rizu [Mizuno, Araragi] Ruxi [Hibari, Rosiel] Saffy [Luke] Starrah [Angela] Thorn [Kazu, Alan] Xae [Mary] Zekoi [Mithos] Zen [Rita]

Comments

Duet

[leviathanclaw.livejournal.com]

Player name: Duet
Characters played:
Yeager :: Tales of Vesperia :: leviathanclaw
Personal concrit link: HMD (http://leviathanclaw.livejournal.com/592.html)
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes
Other comments? Any feedback is appreciated. I know my tagging speed loses a race with molasses. I aim to improve on that.

[explains]

I may be horribly biased about you forever, Duet. But I'd just like to say I fucking SQUEAL every time I get a Yeager tag. Or any tag from you. I know I've been pretty fail about thread dropping these days and that has nothing to do with your characterization.

I can hear Yeager's voice when you type him and it makes me giggle every time. Seeing his work with Kazari is super interesting and I just want to stalk Yeager everywhere and set up eating popcorn to watch him work. You have his voice and trolling and cunning down.

I really don't know what to say. I have no crit. I'd gladly offer some if I did. I'd love to see more of Yeager and his plotting but that's not even crit. That's just selfish desire for more Duet in my RP life.

[greedful-cheat.livejournal.com]

My memory of Yeager is sadly lacking despite the fact that I have played and beaten Vesperia. All I can really remember is his accent and the fact that his two assistants were basically adopted by him... adding to his ability to be a sympathetic character. So my fair warning is there...

With my interactions with Yeager, he really seems to be playing up the multiple sides of the various guilds that he controlled in his world. He's a sympathetic soul to Kazari, making many of their conversations flow because they ultimately have very similar views on some basic level. He's the information master. The one who wants his fingers in everything. He wants to be the winning side. Yeah, I'm probably doing more of an analysis of their relationship, but at least to me, you're playing Yeager well.

Re: Duet

[likeabulldozer.livejournal.com]

I love Yeager and Buffy's stuff so much! I don't know the canon but I enjoy reading and threading with Yeager a lot. I'm looking forward to more of it.