OKAY SO, IN ORDER OF NUMBER OF PSYCHOLOGICAL DISORDERS --
...actually, that won't help me sort them.
UM.
Okay:
Akito: not a character whose canon I know - should that be, 'not two characters whose canon I know'... a question for the ages! But I think he's easy to tag in either version, and I like how you render the difference so seamlessly between the innocent personality and the one that makes Hibari want to punch him through a wall.
Bel-not-sama: VAAAAAAARIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. roflmao I think you've got his voice down, from what I've seen of it/him/them both. It's really cool that you manage to get his hilarity down effortless - Bel is often funny without meaning to (...because, okay, a lot of the fun is at his expense >>!), and you never make him seem like a caricature, or as if he's trying too hard. His interaction with Fran was just. Such a beautiful thing to behold that I cried a sing of single blood tears :(
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...actually, that won't help me sort them.
UM.
Okay:
Akito: not a character whose canon I know - should that be, 'not two characters whose canon I know'... a question for the ages! But I think he's easy to tag in either version, and I like how you render the difference so seamlessly between the innocent personality and the one that makes Hibari want to punch him through a wall.
Bel-not-sama: VAAAAAAARIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. roflmao I think you've got his voice down, from what I've seen of it/him/them both. It's really cool that you manage to get his hilarity down effortless - Bel is often funny without meaning to (...because, okay, a lot of the fun is at his expense >>!), and you never make him seem like a caricature, or as if he's trying too hard. His interaction with Fran was just. Such a beautiful thing to behold that I cried a sing of single blood tears :(