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To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of the HMD comments on this post here below for easy reference.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex I [Rosella, Finnick] Alms [Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy] Ara [Nick] Arwing [Garrus, Lockdown, Gin, Vincente] Ary [Raphael] Ashley [Fran] Audrey [Edward, Amory, Ben] B/k [Hiyori, Demyx, Capt. Hammer, Angua] Bon [Caspian, Mr. Orange, Shira] Brent [Kazari] Caru [Cain, Maria, TMWNN] Catharine [Jezebel] Cella [Haru, Mae] Chibi/Tona [Cameron, Amy, Tessa] Dawn [Mara, Cinna, Haji] Duet [Yeager] Ellie [Ginny] Eri [Castiel, Faith, Donna] Faith [Fred] Felicity [Genesis] Gorse [Jade] Haunt [Euphemia]	Illu [Belphegor, Akito/Agito] Jane [Yuri, Hope, Hitagi] Jansen [Tenth Doctor] Jei [Neil, TARDIS] Jules [Mukuro] Juni [Snake] Kestrel [Florian, Luc] KGaara/Yuki [Aion, Klarth] Kristi [Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Spencer, Ryan, Rose, Myrnin] Laura [William] Leah [Campbell, Rory, Eridan] Lee [Huey] Lief [Guy, Sodia] Lila [Tyr] Lisa [Dawn, Derek, Jill] Lucie [Lenalee, Nana] Luna Quiche [Kohaku] Lysoke [Jack, Cassian] Maddie [Jamie, Kururu] Marion [Stephen, Dulcie, George] Mary [Claire] Melon [Saya] Mici [Eden, Saya, Billy, Edmund, Lucy, Kenny, Peeta, Mr. Pink, Capt. America] Molly [Susan, House, Mr. White] Muffin [Sakura] Nyte [Piglet, Rido] Pixie [Nathan]	Rae[Wilson, Todd] Rizu [Mizuno, Araragi] Ruxi [Hibari, Rosiel] Saffy [Luke] Starrah [Angela] Thorn [Kazu, Alan] Xae [Mary] Zekoi [Mithos] Zen [Rita]

Comments

Illu

[variastorm.livejournal.com]

Player name: Illu
Characters played:
Belphegor | Katekyo Hitman Reborn! | variastorm
Agito and Akito Wanijima | Air Gear | trasalire
Personal concrit link: They both have them, right on top, if you click the links above. eue
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y.

Re: Illu

[antimafioso.livejournal.com]

So, at first I was like,

THIS PERSON IS DA BOMB. On that crack meme. I don't know Air Gear at all beyond having skimmed the first volume waaaaaaaaay back when, so I can't comment constructively on Ag/kito. I could be superficial but it would be that because I don't know!!! He's fun to read?

anyway and then i was like OMG BEL, AWESOME

but I wonder how Mukuro-Bel threads would even go like (thinking)

only I shouldn't have worried because lol KHR.

SOMEHOW OUR THREADS ARE LIKE THE BEST THINGS EVER IDK. I think it's our pleasant inability to take ourselves seriously and allowing the characters to be the morons they are.

but no idk, I really enjoy your Bel. To describe my surprise at how well we clicked threadwise and stuff as "pleasant" would be the vastest of understatements. I wish I could be constructive and useful with him, too, but I'm too busy being delighted and amused in the worst/best way. His ego + idiosyncrasies are purrrfect. He's new so idk just needs moar moar moar. inb4 KHR crew trolls all of poly and brings it to its knees???

[variastorm.livejournal.com]

OBVIOUSLY THAT MEME WAS JUST WONDROUS. WITH WONDROUS PEOPLE. WITH WONDROUS WORDS. that's coo', AG isn't as popular as KHR, anyway. e u e

..yeah, lol khr, full of derps and all of that sort.

I LOVE OUR THREADS. SO MUCH. THEY ARE JUST THE BESTEST OF THE BEST THREADS. AND BEL IS THE PRINCE OF FAST FOOD. WHO LIKES MC FLURRIES AND APPLE DIPPERS AND ASKHASD:KH LMAO. ; u; Thanks. <3 I'm glad I got-- from what you have seen, at least- Bel down in the way you-- like. yeah. / o / I will have to get more posts up soon, then!

[antimafioso.livejournal.com]

I DO LOVE WONDROUS WORDS. also fuck marry kill. I-I don't only read things because they're popular!! ... /shoves Bleach and Naruto in a hole omg

lol derps and idiots and psychopaths and what.

I DON'T KNOW HOW THEY ARE SO AMAZING THEY JUST ARE. LOLOL THANK YOU FOR LETTING ME BE SO, UH. YEAH. ALSDKMSA PRINCE OF FAST FOOD WHAT AM I EVER SMOKING. sldkfs well, I'm not like... any expert on Bel... but I love yours a lot mmk and I hope you're having as much fun as I am. sldfs I know the rest of the city folk must be so much trash but I look forward to see him bounced off them *_*

[triessence.livejournal.com]

.. that is an amusing thing to do on threads yes. .. ................YOUR EVIDECE IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH.

.. dude that is like. all that it is. derps idiots and psychopaths. .. ......and adoption raging.

+ one marshmallow obsessed thing.

* U * I have LOTS OF FUN with our threads. they are always so awesome, and just-- just yeah.

..dude Bel will have so much fun with the trollin'. All the trolling. possibly the frog stabbing too.

can he borrow your apprentice muku. he won't hurt it too much he swears.

[dropkick]

HAVEN'T STALKED BELPHEGOR as I ought to have but have SUPER ENJOYED AGITO/AKITO sob Air Gear.....

T_T this is just me going YAYYYYYY I approve, I like, it's good to have you ;;

/derps off into the night....

[variastorm.livejournal.com]

it is always good to be wanted, yes;;

/ o / Thanks, then, FOR LIKING ME BEING HERE. and liking Ag/kito.

[faroffdream.livejournal.com]

/derps around on all the accounts

<333333333333!!!!!

[triessence.livejournal.com]

/that is always the best kind of derping.

<33333333333333333333333333333333

/HAD TO SWITCH FOR THE HEART ICONS.

[commoneresque.livejournal.com]

AAJIKLFESD OH MY GOD HOW IS HE SO CUTE ;_; LMFF I REMEMBER FIRST READING and like being so WAIT WHAT with his um personality shifts and just uh HEAD OVER HEELS FOR HIM ANYWAY so much o_o lmfdlksflsdjfd in a not creeper way orz uoiewjklfsd


/APPRECIATES THE HEARTS, THE ORANGE, AND THE EYEPATCH ALL!

[triessence.livejournal.com]

THE ONLY WAY THEY COULD TELL IF HE WAS A GUY OR A GIRL AT FIRST WAS BY KAZU LOOKING AT THE CURVES OF HIS ASS. HE COULD SOMEHOW TELL. IT WAS A GUY BY THE CURVES OF HIS ASS. /eyes our kazu.

Akito is just the cutest. I BET HE DOES IT ON PURPOSE. JUST TO CUTE UP THE PLACE.

/HERE HAVE IT ALL.

[commoneresque.livejournal.com]

AHAOIHJKTLEUFIODJSLKUIJOEKLFMDS A DISCERNING EYE~*~*~*~*~*~*~......../eyes also

HE IS ;__________; IT WORKS. I APPROVE OKAY.

LSMFD9UIOJEKLFSD OJEFLKSD /GATHERS IT TO ME mO____________Om now wanting plushie.....

[triessence.livejournal.com]

/must always bring this up whenever possible because Kazu, how can you tell from the curves of his ass. do you look at guy asses a lot.

HE JUST WADDLES AROUND. PURPOSELY ACTING LIKE THE MOST ADORABLE THING EVER. TRYING TO GET IKKI TO FEED HIM, CLIMBIN IN THEM BEDS. BEING A BED INVADER.

He is quite cuddly.

if you're a certain person named ikki.

[dropkick]

uoewjlkfsduiojefklsd one must suppose......

AHHUJOIELKFSDUIJOKLESDUIJOKLEFSDOIJELKSD I LOVE IT SOB SCREAM THAT ICON I JUST /buries face in hands UOIJWKLSDUIJKEFDSUIJOKWEFSDJOIKLEJIOFDKLS

;_; i find it CAVITY INDUCING and I LOVE IT ALL.

/YES WEIRD ON THIS ACCOUNT CRYING FOREVER

[triessence.livejournal.com]

IT'S THE BEST ICON. OUT OF ALL OF THE ONES I HAVE. IT'S JUST THE BEST.

didn't you know. he makes a living off of giving people cavities. it's how he got Kazu to let him stay at his apartment, buy him stuff, get him ice cream, etc, etc. HE JUST GIVES ALL OF THE CAVITIES.

/COME AT ME WITH THE WEIRD. IT'S THE BEST THING EVER.

[renegare.livejournal.com]

OKAY SO, IN ORDER OF NUMBER OF PSYCHOLOGICAL DISORDERS --

...actually, that won't help me sort them.

UM.

Okay:

Akito: not a character whose canon I know - should that be, 'not two characters whose canon I know'... a question for the ages! But I think he's easy to tag in either version, and I like how you render the difference so seamlessly between the innocent personality and the one that makes Hibari want to punch him through a wall.

Bel-not-sama: VAAAAAAARIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. roflmao I think you've got his voice down, from what I've seen of it/him/them both. It's really cool that you manage to get his hilarity down effortless - Bel is often funny without meaning to (...because, okay, a lot of the fun is at his expense >>!), and you never make him seem like a caricature, or as if he's trying too hard. His interaction with Fran was just. Such a beautiful thing to behold that I cried a sing of single blood tears :(

[triessence.livejournal.com]

Three. There's a third one lurking in the back of that oddly-- spacious head I would imagine. Third one who will KICK ASS IF S/HE EVER COMES OUT! just to mention that. because face. /icon.
eue That's always good, though.


BELPHEGOR-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.~~~~
e u e this is a muse that I have worked on for a good.. two, three years now. ..and am actually still trying to improve. because crazy. it's hard to get down right for him. But it makes me feel extremely accomplished when people like the way I portray him, considering I see a lot of different sorts of Bel's wandering around.
..all of the funny that is at his expense, he will get back at you all for it. sometime. eventually. it'll happen. ..as soon as he stops being a lazy ass. or bitches to that Squalo when he gets back. all the bitching. BE PREPARED FOR A VOIBOMB?!

Baw, all the tears man. it was just so wondrous that it needs a few tears here and there. to portray the wonder. the wondrously wondrous wonder. ; u ; he is just the best senpai ever, the bestest of the best. with them knives and sharp things and --

.. oh god I should not reply to these at four in the morning self what are you doing.

IN CONCLUSION--

/ o / Thanks! It's always good to know I'm doing things decently / HAS NOT FUCKED IT UP YET! The-- personality thing especially, because, aside from Bel and his "omg blooooooood~~~" high thing, I haven't really played with that sort of personality switch. |D; -and Bel. because princes', there are a lot of people who see that prince in waay different ways, so it's good to know I'm getting him down in a way you agree with.

[knifecushion.livejournal.com]

GET OUT.


No really I was very excited when I heard we were getting a Bel and seeing as I have a very difficult time taking KHR seriously I am even more impressed by the depth you've managed to give him so far. PLUS THE THREADS I HAVE STALKED HAVE GIVEN ME MUCH JOY, NOT TO MENTION THOSE I HAVE PARTICIPATED IN. So happy you apped him. T_T

[triessence.livejournal.com]

YOU GET OUT.

; u ; thank you. OBVIOUSLY A BEL WAS NEEDED IN HERE. THERE WAS A BEL-LESS FRAN. THIS NEEDED TO BE FIXED.

now you can truly fulfil your username, Fran. aren't you so happy. ♥

[violence-violin.livejournal.com]

I don't know Air Gear at all, but tagging with Agito/Akito has been awesome so far?
You're creative with tags and manage to get the cute to be cute and the aggressive to be aggressive. I like that.

... this is probably not very helpful, but it needed to be said xD

[triessence.livejournal.com]

Pssh. Well, this is always a good thing. to make the cute cute and all that. / o / I haven't really done the whole cutesy character thing, at least for a while before picking this guy up, so it's good to know I'm getting it down right!

[harutastic.livejournal.com]

OH HI FANTASTIC PERSON, FANCY SEEING YOU HERE 8D

First off - wow, he's so much fun to play with. I can't believe he got Haru to joke about so many people behind their backs GASP DON'T CORRUPT HER ALREADY YOU MONSTER PRINCE and I don't even know. I am so very excited for Bel because he's a favourite Varia member of mine and youuuuuu do him justice and I love it.

Give me moar.

[triessence.livejournal.com]

he is picking on all of you Vongola brats.

..one day Bel will just. get Haru to go clothes shopping with him. random shopping trips fuck yeah. It'd be the most cracky thread ever.

<3 THANKS. It's good to know I got him down good for you. |D

[aettir.livejournal.com]

Yours is my favorite Ak/gito.

I am trying to think of less fawning ways to put this, but it's true! I like that Akito's a pacifist of sorts, that he's childish and placid but is very much, at the same time, not a pushover (STOP TOPPING, AKITO) and still a bit of a skeeve for Ikki without making that the be-all and end-all of his character. I love that you don't hesitate in pushing Agito's "I don't give a fuck" attitude to the fore and his stringency in training, and how there's still a sense of orienting towards Kogarasumaru for both of them. You play both personalities very distinctly, and if I had any complaints, it would be that we don't thread enough. Tagging Kazu off of either of them fills my heart with tiny fireworks of joy. ... It's more pleasant than it sounds.

In sum, am looking forward to all the future sharkling abuse. ♥

[triessence.livejournal.com]

You just. stroke my ego so nicely it is amazing. ♥♥♥♥

;; I'm glad I got them down right, especially with your Kazu, because I was SUPER NERVOUS at first whether or not I would do a good job playing with him. (no, no he will never stop topping you. YOU CAN'T EVEN TOP A TINY ASSED SHARK, THAT IS HOW MUCH OF A WIMP YOU ARE YOU NEED MORE TRAINING!!!?!)

We will just have to do all the tags, then. All of them ♥ with all of the abuse.