How's My Driving?!

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H.M.D.?!
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[1] List your name/nickname/handle and your characters for which you would like some feedback (use our handy form, if you like). Open hands, await feedback.

[2] Go forth and leave some polite thoughts, crit, questions, concerns, comments, suggestions, general feedback, or any combination of the above for your fellow players about their respective characters. In this, we really encourage you to ask questions and get explanations about what has gone into characterization decisions. Communication is key. Find out what went into an action or decision and you may come to understand it better. Let's talk it out.

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The Form:
<b>Player name:</b> <b>Characters played:</b> Character :: Fandom :: Character LJ <b>Personal concrit link:</b> <b>Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N:</b> <b>Other comments?</b>

To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of the HMD comments on this post here below for easy reference.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex I [Rosella, Finnick] Alms [Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy] Ara [Nick] Arwing [Garrus, Lockdown, Gin, Vincente] Ary [Raphael] Ashley [Fran] Audrey [Edward, Amory, Ben] B/k [Hiyori, Demyx, Capt. Hammer, Angua] Bon [Caspian, Mr. Orange, Shira] Brent [Kazari] Caru [Cain, Maria, TMWNN] Catharine [Jezebel] Cella [Haru, Mae] Chibi/Tona [Cameron, Amy, Tessa] Dawn [Mara, Cinna, Haji] Duet [Yeager] Ellie [Ginny] Eri [Castiel, Faith, Donna] Faith [Fred] Felicity [Genesis] Gorse [Jade] Haunt [Euphemia]	Illu [Belphegor, Akito/Agito] Jane [Yuri, Hope, Hitagi] Jansen [Tenth Doctor] Jei [Neil, TARDIS] Jules [Mukuro] Juni [Snake] Kestrel [Florian, Luc] KGaara/Yuki [Aion, Klarth] Kristi [Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Spencer, Ryan, Rose, Myrnin] Laura [William] Leah [Campbell, Rory, Eridan] Lee [Huey] Lief [Guy, Sodia] Lila [Tyr] Lisa [Dawn, Derek, Jill] Lucie [Lenalee, Nana] Luna Quiche [Kohaku] Lysoke [Jack, Cassian] Maddie [Jamie, Kururu] Marion [Stephen, Dulcie, George] Mary [Claire] Melon [Saya] Mici [Eden, Saya, Billy, Edmund, Lucy, Kenny, Peeta, Mr. Pink, Capt. America] Molly [Susan, House, Mr. White] Muffin [Sakura] Nyte [Piglet, Rido] Pixie [Nathan]	Rae[Wilson, Todd] Rizu [Mizuno, Araragi] Ruxi [Hibari, Rosiel] Saffy [Luke] Starrah [Angela] Thorn [Kazu, Alan] Xae [Mary] Zekoi [Mithos] Zen [Rita]

Comments

[renegare.livejournal.com]

OKAY SO, IN ORDER OF NUMBER OF PSYCHOLOGICAL DISORDERS --

...actually, that won't help me sort them.

UM.

Okay:

Akito: not a character whose canon I know - should that be, 'not two characters whose canon I know'... a question for the ages! But I think he's easy to tag in either version, and I like how you render the difference so seamlessly between the innocent personality and the one that makes Hibari want to punch him through a wall.

Bel-not-sama: VAAAAAAARIIIIIIIIIIIIIAAAAAAAAAAAAAA. roflmao I think you've got his voice down, from what I've seen of it/him/them both. It's really cool that you manage to get his hilarity down effortless - Bel is often funny without meaning to (...because, okay, a lot of the fun is at his expense >>!), and you never make him seem like a caricature, or as if he's trying too hard. His interaction with Fran was just. Such a beautiful thing to behold that I cried a sing of single blood tears :(

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Three. There's a third one lurking in the back of that oddly-- spacious head I would imagine. Third one who will KICK ASS IF S/HE EVER COMES OUT! just to mention that. because face. /icon.
eue That's always good, though.


BELPHEGOR-SAMAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.~~~~
e u e this is a muse that I have worked on for a good.. two, three years now. ..and am actually still trying to improve. because crazy. it's hard to get down right for him. But it makes me feel extremely accomplished when people like the way I portray him, considering I see a lot of different sorts of Bel's wandering around.
..all of the funny that is at his expense, he will get back at you all for it. sometime. eventually. it'll happen. ..as soon as he stops being a lazy ass. or bitches to that Squalo when he gets back. all the bitching. BE PREPARED FOR A VOIBOMB?!

Baw, all the tears man. it was just so wondrous that it needs a few tears here and there. to portray the wonder. the wondrously wondrous wonder. ; u ; he is just the best senpai ever, the bestest of the best. with them knives and sharp things and --

.. oh god I should not reply to these at four in the morning self what are you doing.

IN CONCLUSION--

/ o / Thanks! It's always good to know I'm doing things decently / HAS NOT FUCKED IT UP YET! The-- personality thing especially, because, aside from Bel and his "omg blooooooood~~~" high thing, I haven't really played with that sort of personality switch. |D; -and Bel. because princes', there are a lot of people who see that prince in waay different ways, so it's good to know I'm getting him down in a way you agree with.