How's My Driving?

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H.M.D.?!
[I KNOW YOU'RE EXCITED!!]

How It Works:
[1] List your name and your characters for which you would like some feedback (use our handy form, if you like)!

[2] Please refrain from posting pictures, .gifs, videos, giant text, sparklies, blinking and moving tags, and &c. outside of collapsed threads. For the sake of our sanity and our load times. You are welcome to link to them in top-level comments, but otherwise please save 'em for collapsed threads.

[3] Open hands, await feedback and go forth and leave some polite thoughts, crit, questions, concerns, comments, suggestions, or any combination of the above for your fellow players about their respective characters. In this, we really encourage you to ask questions and get explanations about what has gone into characterization decisions. Communication is key. Find out what went into an action or decision and you may come to understand it better. Let's talk it out.

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[5] If you'd like, you can certainly list your personal HMD posts and contact posts over in the POLYchromatic Rainbow Pages directory.

[6] As per our community poll, Anonymous is off. We'd also like to request that sockpuppets not be used on this HMD. You are welcome to post a link to a personal HMD thread where Anonymous is allowed; these threads are your own lookout.

The form:
<b>Player name:</b> <b>Characters played:</b> Character :: Fandom :: Character LJ <b>Personal concrit link:</b> <b>Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N:</b> <b>Other comments?</b> Please refrain from posting pictures, .gifs, videos, giant text, sparklies, blinking and moving tags, and &c. in top-level comments

To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex (Rosella) Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy) Ary (Raphael) Ashley (Jack) Audrey (Olivia, Amory) Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry) Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan) Cass (Slick) Cella (Mae, Sif) Chris (Pepper) Christa (Gabriel) Cricket (Akira) Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji) Ellie (Ginny) Emma (Howard) Eppy (Natasha, Simon) Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall) Faith (Fred, Molly) Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde) Haunt (Euphemia)	Inji (Percy J.) Jaina (Roxas) Jane (Yuri, Tony) Jansen (10, Harry) Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind) KaOS (Evil Ed) Katie (Peter) Katya (Pig) Katya II (Karl) Kaye (Marta) Kestrel (Elmer) Kimmeh! (Ikki) Kris (Sam) Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose) Laura (William) Lee (Huey) Liam (Arya, Nathan) Lila (Tyr) Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny) Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn) Mai (Rain, Mercy) Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George) Melon (Saya) Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund) Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White) Mouse (Charlie) Nao (Gazelle) Neko (Ken, Setsuna) Nelly (Eames) Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet) Parsnip (Liam) Pixy (Chase)	Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown) Raine (Estellise, Akane) Rey (Kira) Rizu (Break, Hazuki) Rumi (Liz) Ruxi (Rosiel) Sarah (Bucky, 11) Setine (Thor) Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow) Taryn (Alisha) Thorn (Kazuma) Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey) Toss (Merlin) Val (Elliot) Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert) Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov) Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna) Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth) Zekoi (Mithos) Zen (Rita)

Comments

[haring_to_go]

Player name: Parsnip
Characters played: Liam Lunettes :: Pandora Hearts :: haring_to_go
Personal concrit link: here!
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Either anon or logged in works for me. If you leave anon, please check back once in a while in case I have questions to get us both on the same page.
Other comments? w-what do I put here!

Throw me anything you've got even if it's just that I need to do better at following up on CR or tag around more or something. I'd love concrit, but general impressions and feelings on Liam will help me out a lot too. I still have a bit of ways to go at checking the comms regularly, but I'm doing better then the first HMD so I'm actually pleased with that.

[oceantrauma]

So, I warned you, USELESS COMMENT~! But, I like Liam. No clue about the canon, but his desert post amused me so much, and I think part of that has to do with the player's writing ability, so whether or not it was IC? I do know I ENJOYED it. His personality, in general, is just amusing to bounce Ken off of, since Ken is pretty straight-forward logic, even if he does things impulsively.

[haring_to_go]

USELESS COMMENTS ARE COOL. djksl I pretty much agree with you actually from Liam's perspective. He's such a straight laced character that's used to bouncing off of and dealing with the ridiculousness of his peers that having someone just like him to talk to is a breath of fresh air.

Thank-you!

[destinedtobeunpopular]

You're just great at all your characters, okay. Liam is hilarious, and I think you balance his personality very, very well. I don't think I have anything negative to say, just. I love him.

/o/

[haring_to_go]

I would scream bias, but then that would be the pot calling the kettle black >.> Thank-you, Toss! Hearing that I'm keeping a balance of her personality is actually the greatest compliment. It's easy with this cast to make things too silly, so knowing his serious side is still there is good!

[destinedtobeunpopular]

No bias here whatsoever. You're welcome! <3

[errandry]

Liaaaaam—aaa, it's so lovely to have one and I'd love to see more of him. :> He's exactly the adorable nerd of a secretary I remember, with the same little bit more grit than he'd like to let on. I thought there was something oddly (horribly??) nice about the dreamy resignation with which he dropped into his... numerous, sob... desert deaths. Screaming and flailing and panicking would've thrown it for a loop, so yes. But yeah, he's got a cute voice, he's polite and eager to bend over backwards when it's appropriate and I flat-out enjoy him!

[haring_to_go]

fdjkla;s you always come up with the nicest things to say ///// Thank-you!

Those deaths were so horrible it was great. I was thinking about those for days before the event started and was so glad I got to make use of them! I also kind of figured Liam wouldn't flail or panic over them for a few reasons, but the main one simply being because no death could be worse then the things Barma does to him on a daily basis. That, and he'd have the (erroneous in this case) belief that maybe his March Hare might be able to save him. Unfortunately, animals are much harder to fool then humans!

But, heh, he's a ton of fun to play and I'm glad I'm keeping it enjoyable without making too stufy. Thank-you again!

[superbeast]

I really like your Liam c: When I first encountered him in PH my first thought was "Par's chara! Aaah!" and was all FULL OF EXCITEMENT. Unfortunately I haven't gotten very far in the series to say much in detail, but. I loved reading about his desert-deaths (poor babby ;;) and I thought the thread these two had was really amusing, I'd love for them to have more CR at some point♥

[haring_to_go]

Ah! Liam takes that as a great compliment! He's so easy to ignore and forget and... pft. it's in character of him to be on the sidelines so knowing you're thinking of him really is a huge compliment.

And you'll get to see more of him! It's those chapters in the 50's. They just screw with your heart and mess you up. ;_; good luck with the read, and I'm in full agreement. I'd love to get more CR with Akira.

[forhishonor]

OKAY SO.

I remember way back when I had originally wanted to play Liam but then I actually tried to play him and all I could think was GOSH HE IS SO HARD. X( But then you apped Liam to Poly and I became your devoted stalker because everything I read was just so perfect. Even when you're making silly posts for him (which is a lot of the time), you retain that slightly dry, slightly beaten down humor that makes Liam who he is, and I get that in every single one of his tags. I always did love him in original canon, and you have done nothing but expand my love for him in Poly.

So so glad I apped into your cast, and I look forward to all the future shenanigans!

[closetpervert]

MY RESEARCH BUDDY~! PAL~! WHY YES IT'S ANOTHER USELESS COMMENT BUT I AM HERE TO SAY THAT HE IS VERY LOVEABLE AND I LOVE INTERACTING WITH HIM~<33333

[shall_yield_us]

SO I think you took a character that hadn't that much to work with canonically and turned him into this amazingly 3D, lovable, interesting young man I can see fitting his position in their society, in the Barma household, in Pandora, and Xerxes Break's little ~ group ~ of fun and games (that kill).

Your Liam's just really, really great.

[cametolife]

par, why haven't we interacted here, yet? (hi, this is rumi.) i've seen liam everywhere, but have yet to tag him. that said, while i'm completely canon blind to PH, i really do enjoy him! he seems like a neat character and his posts are always a joy to stalk read. ♥