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To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex (Rosella) Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy) Ary (Raphael) Ashley (Jack) Audrey (Olivia, Amory) Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry) Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan) Cass (Slick) Cella (Mae, Sif) Chris (Pepper) Christa (Gabriel) Cricket (Akira) Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji) Ellie (Ginny) Emma (Howard) Eppy (Natasha, Simon) Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall) Faith (Fred, Molly) Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde) Haunt (Euphemia)	Inji (Percy J.) Jaina (Roxas) Jane (Yuri, Tony) Jansen (10, Harry) Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind) KaOS (Evil Ed) Katie (Peter) Katya (Pig) Katya II (Karl) Kaye (Marta) Kestrel (Elmer) Kimmeh! (Ikki) Kris (Sam) Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose) Laura (William) Lee (Huey) Liam (Arya, Nathan) Lila (Tyr) Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny) Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn) Mai (Rain, Mercy) Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George) Melon (Saya) Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund) Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White) Mouse (Charlie) Nao (Gazelle) Neko (Ken, Setsuna) Nelly (Eames) Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet) Parsnip (Liam) Pixy (Chase)	Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown) Raine (Estellise, Akane) Rey (Kira) Rizu (Break, Hazuki) Rumi (Liz) Ruxi (Rosiel) Sarah (Bucky, 11) Setine (Thor) Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow) Taryn (Alisha) Thorn (Kazuma) Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey) Toss (Merlin) Val (Elliot) Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert) Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov) Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna) Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth) Zekoi (Mithos) Zen (Rita)

Comments

JANSEN

[captainfuckingmagic]

Player name: Jansen
Characters played:
The Tenth Doctor | Doctor Who | am_i_being_rude
Harry Lockhart | Kiss Kiss Bang Bang | captainfuckingmagic
Personal concrit link: Harry's
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y; Go for it.
Other comments? Explained on plurk some activity reasons. Don't feel like posting them here as they were predominately medical, but also, you know, just personal slowness. Harry is a little difficult to get right in... What things he does and doesn't know, so if you feel that I'm doing that wrong, feel free to correct. As always, if Ten ought to be doing something, or his voice is off, DO SPEAK UP. For anyone.

[warmachine]

Janseeeen. Your activity has been a little lower lately which is absolutely understandable but still a pity because especially Ten with his hyperactivity should be all over and in everyone's business and you do him so brilliantly that it's just sad to see less of him, y'know? I can't really say much about Harry since I neither know his canon nor have my pups interacted with him a lot, but as for Ten, you definitely have his voice down very well and you/your google-fu is amazing in that Ten and his babble is absolutely believable and spot on. Seriously. You're brilliant with him and that is the very reason why I would love to see more activity with him. If your Ten were only mediocre, it wouldn't matter so much, but he's fantastic and therefore I want more of him. Pretty sure I'm not the only one.

Re: JANSEN

[signatures]

I don't necessarily know either canon, but since Tona focused on Ten I'll focus on Harry! I think he's a really interesting character who appears to have a lot of versatility as far as his own personal abilities and what can be done with him, and I find him very intriguing! I hope to get some CR with him in the future :)

[threeolives]

I have enjoyed Pepper's interactions with both Ten and Harry. The latter is great 'cause she at least is still working on the "looks-like-Tony-but-isn't-Tony" aspect, but at the same time they have a great banter developing. I'm sure she and Ten will have more interactions as she feels her way around City Solutions, being its new CEO and all.

No worries on the activity. We all understand that life can derail RP sometimes, and there's nothing wrong with doing what you need to do to take care of yourself first and foremost.

[ex_bloodcakedarmor707]

I love your Ten! I love your Ten!! I ♥ your Ten!!!!!

How many times can I say that without it getting weird? Three? Okay then. Got it covered.

Seriously though, I don't think I've ever read a better Ten. You aren't afraid to take the time to type out all the rambly, thoughtful parts of him and I LOVE that. I love that you do so much with his personality both in voice and in introspection. He sounds and acts like Ten. I can hear him in my mind when I read the tags and that just... thrills me to no end as a fangirl of all things Ten.

Also, I was so nervous about bringing Jenny in and you welcomed me with open arms. Thanks so much for that. It really meant the world to me and continues to mean the world to me. And thanks for making every thread between them just so much fun.

There is really not enough fangirling to give you over how you write this multi-layered character with so much history. All the love! ♥

Re: JANSEN

[coyote_walking]

I love your Doctor and hope you can be around more soon because I do love his interactions with Mercy. And I'd love to throw Rain at him. ;)

[stopbleepingme]

You say Donna is easy to play off of because she is good but I counter that she's only good because your Ten is SO EASY TO PLAY OF OFF AND PERFECT AND AWESOME. I feel like we jumped right into their BFFness without a hitch, and I should thank you and send you cookies for it. I love that maybe our styles correspond? We don't have to thread every little thing but I feel like you're always right here with me when Donna flies off the handle for something that happens behind the RP scenes -- and his reactions are priceless and pitch-perfect.

Mostly, you've made me feel comfortable to play her as obnoxious and ridiculous as multiple-texty as I feel she would truly be. I never wonder if I'm bugging you the way I do with most people, so. Thank you for helping me play her the way I want to by being amazing at Ten.

One of the main reasons I love her so much is her friendship with Ten, and being able to play with that has made this so much fun!

/hugs you close

[whattingawhat]

I think I've said how awesome your Ten is so much that it's bordering on creepy but he really is amazing. I couldn't ask for a better Ten or mun to play Rose off of. Their interactions never cease to either break my heart, give me diabetes or make me laugh.

I still have not seen Harry's movie but it's on my list of movies to order next time I go on a movie spree on Amazon. However, he's a really fun character to thread with. I've enjoyed his threads with Lucy so much and really need to toss more people at him just for the fun of it.

Feel better and keep being fantastic