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The form:
To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.
Valya
Characters played:
- Raymond Leon || In Time ||
- Jack || BioShock ||
- Robert Fischer || Inception ||
Personal concrit link: Raymond, Jack, and Fischer each have their own with anon enabled and IP logging disabled.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Y!
Other comments? I am well aware that I need to get Fischer's activity boosted, sob. Other than that, please let me know what I can do to improve upon any of my characters!
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Ray is wonderful, I think. I don't know his canon, but you play him very consistently as sarcastic, distant and somewhat arrogant and it's great. He's such a joy to read. I especially love his interactions with Ivy, for the awkward. I hope that the learning process of how to deal with a child will take a while, because I enjoy it so much.
Jack I sadly have not paid much attention to, but I want to change that. He certainly seems very interesting and I think I shall throw both Tessa and Ivy at him at the next best opportunity, oh yes.
Fischer, like you said, needs to be more visible and active.
if I should app Saito, I want all the interaction between them. All of it.So basically I only had something to say to Ray ajdakhsd never mind me ;;