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thatrainbowcity2012-03-09 12:07 am
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To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.
Pixy
Characters played: Robert Chase :: House M.D. ::
Personal concrit link: Voila.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged?: Well, never encouraged, but always allowed.
Other comments? I am buried in RL and papers right now, March will be slow, aroundness-wise.
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I love that he's such a good buy, but also a bit of a stiff douchebag, but so visibly trying. idk, you just make him fun.
...also, perhaps a little OT, but - I was rereading Lucifer these days, and of course instantly thought of you.
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And baww. Maybe Mazikeen will come to glare at Rosiel one of these 4th walls.
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And I know non of my characters can hold a candle to his intellect but I hope you don't mind my guys tagging into your Chase posts anyway! He can be annoyed with them, or whatever. lol
Anyway, kudos! ♥
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And thank you. I watch entirely too many medical documentaries and do quite a lot of research for him because it really is an aspect of the character I enjoy. I always worry how well I do at the part that can't be researched, his general way of picking personalities apart, but it's good to hear at least the jargon sounds plausible. Thanks!
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So, when I got here, I kind of figured due to the nature of the OC I decided would be a good idea to bring that I would be in a corner trying not to offend people too much, mostly just playing with the people who knew me. But not only did you come play with me, you didn't mind my tl;dr narration and you gave me your prose back.
As someone who... invests a lot into my narration and can't really do without it, it means a lot to me when I have it returned, it feels really good, and I've very much enjoyed your clever prose and your willingness to learn about my character and to let me learn about yours in kind.
From an OOC perspective, I have also enjoyed that I do feel like I can talk to you easily about what I would like to see and where I would like to go.
Sooo, don't worry at all about being busy, I don't mind waiting. -puppy flop on your feet.-
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I love tl;dr when it's so well purposed and thought out and it always is with your characters. I'm glad he prodded her, their CR has turned into some of his most interesting, and talking to her often helps me establish where I am with him if that makes sense, as he doesn't use the same kind of facade in her company. I really do enjoy plotting about with you.
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I hate you.
But no, seriously-- you do a lovely job of letting him be kind of a dick, outwardly, that is all squishy and caring underneath. Also his snarky humor? Perfect. Absolutely beautiful!
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But I am sure I can find something for him to be a complete jerk about if you'd like to hate him again.