How's My Driving?

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To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex (Rosella) Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy) Ary (Raphael) Ashley (Jack) Audrey (Olivia, Amory) Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry) Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan) Cass (Slick) Cella (Mae, Sif) Chris (Pepper) Christa (Gabriel) Cricket (Akira) Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji) Ellie (Ginny) Emma (Howard) Eppy (Natasha, Simon) Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall) Faith (Fred, Molly) Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde) Haunt (Euphemia)	Inji (Percy J.) Jaina (Roxas) Jane (Yuri, Tony) Jansen (10, Harry) Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind) KaOS (Evil Ed) Katie (Peter) Katya (Pig) Katya II (Karl) Kaye (Marta) Kestrel (Elmer) Kimmeh! (Ikki) Kris (Sam) Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose) Laura (William) Lee (Huey) Liam (Arya, Nathan) Lila (Tyr) Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny) Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn) Mai (Rain, Mercy) Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George) Melon (Saya) Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund) Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White) Mouse (Charlie) Nao (Gazelle) Neko (Ken, Setsuna) Nelly (Eames) Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet) Parsnip (Liam) Pixy (Chase)	Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown) Raine (Estellise, Akane) Rey (Kira) Rizu (Break, Hazuki) Rumi (Liz) Ruxi (Rosiel) Sarah (Bucky, 11) Setine (Thor) Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow) Taryn (Alisha) Thorn (Kazuma) Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey) Toss (Merlin) Val (Elliot) Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert) Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov) Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna) Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth) Zekoi (Mithos) Zen (Rita)

Comments

taryn

[awkwards]

Player name: taryn
Characters played: alisha, awkwards of misfits
Personal concrit link: here
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: whatever you're comfortable with.
Other comments? i know i've been slow - i've started up at uni, and work does eat a lot of my time if i happen to get an extended shift - but i worry that i'm probably slower than that (or unreliable in a sense where it's really irritating). anything on how i can improve alisha would be excellent; i fear i give the same tags at times. also, alisha was canon updated from 2x06 to 3x03 for reference. c:

[cametolife]

wrt rl things, take your time. real life > rp, always. and i'm still canon blind to misfits (one day i will fix this!), but i really love alisha. she's a fun character and i enjoy the life you bring to her. i'd love to thread her and liz more once life's calmed down for you. ♥

[awkwards]

(you should! it's an amazing show!) thank you. ♥ liz and alisha cr is on my "must get" list. c:

[tamitha]

we can do this! (gym)

Re: taryn

[whattingawhat]

Taryn, I love Alisha so very very much. Her CR with Dean is amazing and I'm really looking forward to seeing where their interactions go. I've not seen her canon but it's on my list of things to watch.

Don't stop being fantastic and I hope uni and work get easier for you.

[awkwards]

YOU SHOULD WATCH IT! for it's really excellent and hilarious. but, thank you. i enjoy their cr immensely, just like i expressed over at your comment. c: it's incredibly interesting and i'm so glad that we are developing it!

;o; me too. can buffy and dean slay and salt it for me?

[whattingawhat]

Yes! To all of this. Yeah I've definitely got it on my list of things. I've just got to get times for proper downloads or netflix needs to bring it on instant watch.

Psh! Of course they can.

[designedtoparty]

Slow you may be, but RL > RP and all that, and honestly I don't mind in the slightest. You are more than willing to backtag, so I don't feel I'm losing anything from that. I'm actually very glad you're as happy to backtag as I am, especially since I'm slow myself and our timezones are not on the best of terms.

As for Alisha, you play her beautifully. I really like how antagonistic Nathan and Alisha are with each other, but you still manage to show she cares underneath her annoyance.

The only thing I would say to you is you're far too good at TL;DR. By the time I get to write up my crit to you I feel as though it's inadequate and I can't possibly write enough to express my love for you and Alisha.

Also, you need to adjust to a GMT/BST schedule so our paths can cross more. It's very inconsiderate of you to act like you live on the opposite side of the globe or something.

[awkwards]

I BACKTAG TO LURE YOU IN MY DEAR






our timezones are like two lovers who refuse to sit in the same room as each other. i always know when you're up, i'm about to go to bed. ;o; they want to keep us a part! one day, we'll be on at the same time (like the good old days where i'd stay up late and you'd stay up late) and we'll get some back and forth. it amazes me how many threads we still have going and that it took me until now to get them confused lmao and that they seem to develop things at a very snail's pace, which is very nathan and alisha imo. and

i always worry i give you the same tags! so if i ever do, slap me with a fish please. and she does not care!! they are not friends!

i do it to confuse you and so that you will love me. ♥

lam i am sorry for my inconsideration. does it hurt your feelings? ♥