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Nao

[virginwings]

Player name: Nao
Characters played: Gazelle :: Air Gear :: virginwings
Personal concrit link: Here.
Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N: Yes.
Other comments? Can't think of much, but open to anything!

[errandry]

So, Gazelle's the sweetest and I enjoy your voice for her! It's got that crisp but kind of derpy sound that I remember, and I'd love to see her around more, saying her usual overly forthright things or just going :O at all the City's million puzzling things because you play her adorably.

I'd also enjoy seeing her break out of her Kaito-related shell a little! I can understand her clinging a bit, since he's probably all the more important to her from that particular canon point, but—I don't know, I kind of loved those moments in canon where Gazelle stepped away from the self-sacrificial spotlight or the sappy scenes with her true love and showed spine. Where she called Kaito on acting like a coward and running from the Takeuchis, for instance, or when she saved That One Guy Nike dropped from the sky whose name I can never remember, or when she ultimately chose to shoot herself in the head. Not that we've that kind of drama ongoing in the City at the moment, but! It's a few other sides of her you could play with if you felt like it?

[virginwings]

Actually, it's like you read my mind or rather my slow-going-goals for Gazelle. As for the part about that spine of hers, I'm totally working on it open to ideas on to how to make even just a little of the drama needed to make it show. >>;

[errandry]

I'd go with the slow start, then! It might be a bit easier to pull determination if she has actual folks outside the cast she knows to stick up for, etc. :> Less out-of-the-blue than drama, too, especially with the shake-ups in her life lately.

[virginwings]

Alright then. o7 I shall just continue on my CR building path.

Nao

[intheblanks]

I enjoy reading your crew, so try not to mind Chase if he pokes his nose in a little now and then.

[virginwings]

I don't mind at all. When Chase came into that thread and ended up asking about Akito/Agito/Lind I was laughing all over the place just reading the thread. He's totally welcome to stick his head in their business as far as I am concerned.

[sixwinged]

Having a Gazelle in game seemed like it'd be weird, at first. Since there's Lind-- and the sharks in general, plus Kaito running around-- I wasn't sure how it'd go at first, you know? o:

But your Gazelle just pulled them all together even more (after the awkward), and she's such a blast to tag around with. Her and Akito have this thing going that's just adorable, and it's fun to have Agito kind of walk around her a bit.

I love your voice for her, too! She's cute, adorable, and-- yes, follows that IC line. Although I do agree with thorn-- seeing her stick up for others and step out from Kaito's side from time to time would be nice. /o/

[virginwings]

Aw, I'm glad you think she's pulled them together.

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And I'll try to do just that.