How's My Driving?

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<b>Player name:</b> <b>Characters played:</b> Character :: Fandom :: Character LJ <b>Personal concrit link:</b> <b>Anonymous allowed/encouraged? Y/N:</b> <b>Other comments?</b> Please refrain from posting pictures, .gifs, videos, giant text, sparklies, blinking and moving tags, and &c. in top-level comments

To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex (Rosella) Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy) Ary (Raphael) Ashley (Jack) Audrey (Olivia, Amory) Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry) Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan) Cass (Slick) Cella (Mae, Sif) Chris (Pepper) Christa (Gabriel) Cricket (Akira) Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji) Ellie (Ginny) Emma (Howard) Eppy (Natasha, Simon) Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall) Faith (Fred, Molly) Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde) Haunt (Euphemia)	Inji (Percy J.) Jaina (Roxas) Jane (Yuri, Tony) Jansen (10, Harry) Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind) KaOS (Evil Ed) Katie (Peter) Katya (Pig) Katya II (Karl) Kaye (Marta) Kestrel (Elmer) Kimmeh! (Ikki) Kris (Sam) Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose) Laura (William) Lee (Huey) Liam (Arya, Nathan) Lila (Tyr) Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny) Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn) Mai (Rain, Mercy) Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George) Melon (Saya) Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund) Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White) Mouse (Charlie) Nao (Gazelle) Neko (Ken, Setsuna) Nelly (Eames) Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet) Parsnip (Liam) Pixy (Chase)	Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown) Raine (Estellise, Akane) Rey (Kira) Rizu (Break, Hazuki) Rumi (Liz) Ruxi (Rosiel) Sarah (Bucky, 11) Setine (Thor) Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow) Taryn (Alisha) Thorn (Kazuma) Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey) Toss (Merlin) Val (Elliot) Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert) Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov) Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna) Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth) Zekoi (Mithos) Zen (Rita)

Comments

rumi.

[cametolife]

player name: rumi
characters played: liz park | roswell | cametolife
personal concrit link: ★ ( comments screened, anon enabled, ip tracking disabled )
anonymous allowed/encouraged? y/n: allowed if you're more comfortable with anoning, though i prefer face-to-face crit discussion.
other comments? work's been keeping me busy, so i've been a touch scarce lately, but that should change now that things are calming down. ♥

[ex_bloodcakedarmor707]

I adore your Liz. I adore you and all your characters, really. It makes me so excited that things are calming down a bit for you cause I've been looking for a way to slip some of my guys into a Liz thread and the slowing down of RL things means there could be more Liz-dom. :) Can you imagine Liz with her aliens and Jenny with her aliens? And Liz and Dawn would be great friends. And Derek would ask how old she is and possibly try to be her dad or charm her. It depends on what mood he's in. All the possibilities! Anyway, all the love and I can't wait to see more!! ♥

[tamitha]

i look forward to more interaction with your characters! especially dawn and jenny. dawn's close to liz's age, and jenny's got her alien thing going for her + liz is pretty tight with some of the doctor who cast already, so that cr should be easy to establish! :D

[stopbleepingme]

your liz i can't really deal with how adorable she is

don't worry about slowness, i think everyone's always in some state of inactivity, but the fact of the matter is that despite that, you keep liz consistent and you don't ignore that you aren't the most super active annoyingly boomeranging tagger in the world. people appreciate that shit.

you show her analytic side, not to mention the fact that she's introverted but curious enough in that scientist way to bring her out into the world, checking out the city with a microscope. and even though she's a little reserved, you always manage to give a lot in your tags, for us to respond to. \o/ you're a lovely rper, darling. there's a reason cas is curious about her (and noooot in the creepy trenchcoat way, i promise.)

[tamitha]

ajsdkjahsdkf this comment means so much to me, for i'm constantly worried about not paying enough attention to the various aspects of her. i really don't want to get sucked into one trope or another with her, which is really easy to do if the embarrassing roswell fics i wrote in high school are anything to go by... so hearing that i'm doing the opposite makes me worlds of happy. ;w; ♥

Re: rumi.

[whattingawhat]

Bwah. You are such a wonderful person to rp with. Let's establish that first and foremost. Second, you do a beautiful job with Liz. I think she's a difficult character to portray, especially without cast around but you've done a gorgeous job of integrating her into the City and getting her out while remaining true to her character.

Kudos on being wonderful!

[tamitha]

ngl, it was an awkward start for me with her, because of the whole non-cast aspect. but in the end, i think being a lone canon warrior has really worked out for her, because it's allowed me to play her as something other than just an alien's human girlfriend, y'know? i'm happy to hear that i'm doing good with that and it is YOU who is the wonderful person to play with. ♥

[awkwards]

forever canon blind but i find liz super interesting and hope to learn more about her through tagging you. ;) since i know you play a few other characters outside of poly, it's really interesting to see that you can play manipulative, broody sort of people and switch over to someone who i kind of assume is very bright and not-so-broody and you do it really well. her and alisha need some more cr, for a multiple of reasons, but one of them being that i enjoy tagging you immensely.

rl >>> rp. kick work in the butt and relax. ;)

[tamitha]

i won't lie, there are some days i can't muster up the optimism needed to portray her, but at the same time, i like the challenge that comes with her being so outside my usual type? since i tend to gravitate towards characters that are so far from the kind of character she is. and yyyy, she and alisha need all the cr, because she's amazing and so are you, and i miss tagging wtih you. i need theri cr my life! ♥