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thatrainbowcity2012-03-09 12:07 am
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How's My Driving?
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Sarah
Characters played: Bucky Barnes :: Captain America ::
The Eleventh Doctor :: Doctor Who ::
Personal concrit link: Bucky || The Doctor
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Okay, so. Bucky. LET ME COUNT THE WAYS I LOVE HIM. You took the character from the movie and fleshed him out and made him into this immensely likeable guy. He's a soldier and a bit of an ass sometimes and he has walls around him, yeah, but he's also incredibly caring and I think you're doing an incredibly good job in portraying his relationships with different people - the developing relationship with Steve, his friendship with Amy, the way he is around Tony and also Howard, aldkjaslj. You're very consistent and active with him, too. If I had to think of one thing you could do better with him.... I wouldn't be able to come up with anything, ugh. Well. Maybe he can be badass more often? I don't even know.
The Doctor. Oh man, first of all, I'm so incredibly happy that you brought in Eleven. It's made Amy so very happy and makes the City bearable now that Rory's gone. Without him there, I don't know what she would have done. You have his voice down so well and most of the times I really hear Matt Smith in my head when reading your tags, so kudos on managing with his voice. The only "complaint" (it isn't really a complaint) I have is that he's not as active as perhaps the Doctor would be? It's not a complaint in the sense that I know your tag load and also you give Bucky preference sometimes WHICH I DON'T MIND AT ALL BECAUSE alskjdlajs Bucky but. Yes. That's the one thing where you could improve with him, I think, though it really isn't as though your activity with him is bad at all ;;
.... Basically I fail at this critique thing what am I even.
ILU SARAH /clings to
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Ahhh, no thank you. I always worry that I'm taking Bucky away from the film and making him something he shouldn't be, but I always sense such good guy vibes that I'm glad it's coming through and I adore his friendship with everyone, especially Amy. Amy and he are so wonderful. They need to just hang tough together forever. But yeah, he needs to do a little bit more in the line of BADASS BARNES. But I can never figure out what would be acceptable and what would not.
MAN, MY ACTIVITY WITH ELEVEN IS SO SPOTTY, which makes me sad because he has paid time from you and I wanna make it worth your while? But I will say that I have finally bought season six? So that'll be with me this week sometime, and I'll be able to sort of remind myself what he's like in canon point, because it's all very much memory based. AND I WANT ALL THE THINGS WITH HIM. HE AND AMY NEED TO JUST BE TOGETHER FOREVER.
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Your Eleven? He's also wonderful. He sounds so Doctor-ish, and even Howard thinks he's a bit strange, so you're doing everything right. He can't be an easy muse to play either so all of the awards.
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Re: Sarah
Okay so I don't know Dr. Who (I have seriously only seen one episode) so I'll not touch that, but I will talk about Bucky!
I love how you play him. I think that how you can pick up something that Steve drops and seamlessly integrate it into their conversation is fabulous, and I love that we can pick up these threads of their past lives back in Brooklyn and weave them through who they are now. I seriously get excited each time I see a tag from you, no matter where it is. I feel like I can trust you as a player.
And his voice, I think it's just fantastic. I hear Sebastian Stan say those words, and it's so perfectly Bucky Barnes. I just.
I'm so glad you apped him, I'm so unbelievably cheered by their CR even when it's breaking my heart.
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I am so glad, right? Because I love doing the whole let's bicker about when we were kids thing, and I get nervous that I'm like, annoying when that happens, SO TO KNOW YOU LIKE IT TOO IS GREAT. I think it makes them unbelievably awesome to rp out because they have known each other FROM THE DAWN OF TIME.
/LATCHES ON.
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