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robot_mod ([personal profile] robot_mod) wrote in [community profile] thatrainbowcity2012-03-09 12:07 am

How's My Driving?

H.M.D.?!
[I KNOW YOU'RE EXCITED!!]


How It Works:
[1] List your name and your characters for which you would like some feedback (use our handy form, if you like)!

[2] Please refrain from posting pictures, .gifs, videos, giant text, sparklies, blinking and moving tags, and &c. outside of collapsed threads. For the sake of our sanity and our load times. You are welcome to link to them in top-level comments, but otherwise please save 'em for collapsed threads.

[3] Open hands, await feedback and go forth and leave some polite thoughts, crit, questions, concerns, comments, suggestions, or any combination of the above for your fellow players about their respective characters. In this, we really encourage you to ask questions and get explanations about what has gone into characterization decisions. Communication is key. Find out what went into an action or decision and you may come to understand it better. Let's talk it out.

[4] Please try to be polite and constructive. Can't stress that enough, can I? Give suggestions and ask questions! Be constructive! But please also refrain from using "placeholder" comments. HMD isn't going anywhere, I promise!

[5] If you'd like, you can certainly list your personal HMD posts and contact posts over in the POLYchromatic Rainbow Pages directory.

[6] As per our community poll, Anonymous is off. We'd also like to request that sockpuppets not be used on this HMD. You are welcome to post a link to a personal HMD thread where Anonymous is allowed; these threads are your own lookout.

The form:


To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - HI - PQ - Z
Alex (Rosella)
Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy)
Ary (Raphael)
Ashley (Jack)
Audrey (Olivia, Amory)
Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry)
Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan)
Cass (Slick)
Cella (Mae, Sif)
Chris (Pepper)
Christa (Gabriel)
Cricket (Akira)
Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji)
Ellie (Ginny)
Emma (Howard)
Eppy (Natasha, Simon)
Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall)
Faith (Fred, Molly)

Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde)
Haunt (Euphemia)
Inji (Percy J.)
Jaina (Roxas)
Jane (Yuri, Tony)
Jansen (10, Harry)
Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind)
KaOS (Evil Ed)
Katie (Peter)
Katya (Pig)
Katya II (Karl)
Kaye (Marta)
Kestrel (Elmer)
Kimmeh! (Ikki)
Kris (Sam)
Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose)
Laura (William)
Lee (Huey)
Liam (Arya, Nathan)
Lila (Tyr)
Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny)
Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn)
Mai (Rain, Mercy)
Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George)
Melon (Saya)
Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund)
Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White)
Mouse (Charlie)
Nao (Gazelle)
Neko (Ken, Setsuna)
Nelly (Eames)
Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet)
Parsnip (Liam)
Pixy (Chase)
Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown)
Raine (Estellise, Akane)
Rey (Kira)
Rizu (Break, Hazuki)
Rumi (Liz)
Ruxi (Rosiel)
Sarah (Bucky, 11)
Setine (Thor)
Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow)
Taryn (Alisha)
Thorn (Kazuma)
Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey)
Toss (Merlin)
Val (Elliot)
Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert)
Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov)
Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna)
Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth)
Zekoi (Mithos)
Zen (Rita)
oceantrauma: (Shy and bashful)

Re: Raine

[personal profile] oceantrauma 2012-03-09 05:34 am (UTC)(link)
I think I've already said what I think of your Estelle? If not, I like how brave you are with her. You get her out there and have stuff happen to her. She's not passive, as she shouldn't be, but I've seen her played that way. Or maybe it was just inactivity? Either way, I appreciate the difference I can see in your version of her.

She's pure-hearted and sweet, but has a dark portion to her, as others have mentioned. You make her lively and vivid with all of her emotions. It's a beautiful thing to see.

I don't know anything about Akane, but I like her, so that counts for something.
firstaid: (Hopeful)

[personal profile] firstaid 2012-03-09 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you for your comment. It's honestly really encouraging since I do kind of go on a limb with her and fear a lot of things ._.

But I'm glad you enjoy my version of her!
oceantrauma: (Pleased to meet you)

[personal profile] oceantrauma 2012-03-09 05:47 am (UTC)(link)
You do, but it's fun, and it works, and it's still IC, far as I can tell. Her encouragement, her concern, her desire to heal - even emotional pain - it's all there, and it's all her.
firstaid: (relief)

[personal profile] firstaid 2012-03-09 05:51 am (UTC)(link)
If it's fun, it works and it's still IC, then I suppose that's what matters. Mostly the fun and works part though. X3