How's My Driving?

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To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex (Rosella) Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy) Ary (Raphael) Ashley (Jack) Audrey (Olivia, Amory) Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry) Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan) Cass (Slick) Cella (Mae, Sif) Chris (Pepper) Christa (Gabriel) Cricket (Akira) Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji) Ellie (Ginny) Emma (Howard) Eppy (Natasha, Simon) Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall) Faith (Fred, Molly) Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde) Haunt (Euphemia)	Inji (Percy J.) Jaina (Roxas) Jane (Yuri, Tony) Jansen (10, Harry) Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind) KaOS (Evil Ed) Katie (Peter) Katya (Pig) Katya II (Karl) Kaye (Marta) Kestrel (Elmer) Kimmeh! (Ikki) Kris (Sam) Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose) Laura (William) Lee (Huey) Liam (Arya, Nathan) Lila (Tyr) Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny) Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn) Mai (Rain, Mercy) Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George) Melon (Saya) Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund) Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White) Mouse (Charlie) Nao (Gazelle) Neko (Ken, Setsuna) Nelly (Eames) Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet) Parsnip (Liam) Pixy (Chase)	Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown) Raine (Estellise, Akane) Rey (Kira) Rizu (Break, Hazuki) Rumi (Liz) Ruxi (Rosiel) Sarah (Bucky, 11) Setine (Thor) Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow) Taryn (Alisha) Thorn (Kazuma) Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey) Toss (Merlin) Val (Elliot) Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert) Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov) Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna) Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth) Zekoi (Mithos) Zen (Rita)

Comments

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LMFAO CRY I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO EVEN START...

I just have a lot of fun with all of your characters, Tona! I really look forward to what we have planned with Ivy, Eames' and Rhodey's barking, and hopefully more threads between Tessa and Eames now that they have so much in common, just an entirely different spectrum when it comes to approaching it - it fascinates both me and Eames!

As for Saito, I think he's great! He has a very distinct business-with-pleasure sort of attitude when it comes to the way he speaks that I think you do a great job with - the only thing I would suggest is maybe if you wanted to dick around with a possible prose or action log with brackets, we could practice his internal thoughts and stuff like that? :) Up to you! \o

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ALWAYS AT THE BEGINNING? Or is that not imaginative enough ;;

Eames' and Rhodey's interaction was wonderful and alskjdaj IN CASE YOU HADN'T NOTICED i'm kind of really looking forward to family day an awful lot u.u /the least subtle and Tessa and Eames just need all the interaction. I think Tessa can learn a lot from Eames in terms of self-confidence and confidence in her abilities and what it means to Change/forge someone else, idk, and maybe Eames can learn something from her as well.

Haha, yeah. I should definitely practice his internal thoughts. For the most part I haven't done that because— well, I shouldn't quite know where to start. I think if I'm really apping him here, I'll need to come up with a proper background for him, if only so that I have some sort of reference for myself. I both love and hate that about Inception, how much freedom it gives //