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To the best of my abilities, I'll keep an ongoing and alphabetical list of everyone's HMD comments here below for your browsing pleasure.

A - H	I - P	Q - Z
Alex (Rosella) Alms (Brian, Allison, Neil, Frankie, Tommy) Ary (Raphael) Ashley (Jack) Audrey (Olivia, Amory) Bon (Mr. Orange, Jerry) Caru (Cain, Poncho-kun, Katan) Cass (Slick) Cella (Mae, Sif) Chris (Pepper) Christa (Gabriel) Cricket (Akira) Dawn (Mara, Cinna, Haji) Ellie (Ginny) Emma (Howard) Eppy (Natasha, Simon) Eri (Faith, Castile, Donna, McGonagall) Faith (Fred, Molly) Gadgets (Ariadne, Mr. Blonde) Haunt (Euphemia)	Inji (Percy J.) Jaina (Roxas) Jane (Yuri, Tony) Jansen (10, Harry) Jessi (Akito/Agito/Lind) KaOS (Evil Ed) Katie (Peter) Katya (Pig) Katya II (Karl) Kaye (Marta) Kestrel (Elmer) Kimmeh! (Ikki) Kris (Sam) Kristi (Dean, Buffy, Lucy, Rose) Laura (William) Lee (Huey) Liam (Arya, Nathan) Lila (Tyr) Lisa (Dawn, Derek, Jenny) Lysoke (Cassian, Glenn) Mai (Rain, Mercy) Marion (Stephen, Dulcie, George) Melon (Saya) Mici (Saya, Eden, Capt. America, Mr. Pink, Billy, Edmund) Molly (Dr. House, Mr. White) Mouse (Charlie) Nao (Gazelle) Neko (Ken, Setsuna) Nelly (Eames) Nyte (Solomon, Rido, Piglet) Parsnip (Liam) Pixy (Chase)	Rae (Wilson, Todd, Doc Brown) Raine (Estellise, Akane) Rey (Kira) Rizu (Break, Hazuki) Rumi (Liz) Ruxi (Rosiel) Sarah (Bucky, 11) Setine (Thor) Tam (Curt, Teddy, Sparrow) Taryn (Alisha) Thorn (Kazuma) Tona (Tessa, Amy, The Archive, Rhodey) Toss (Merlin) Val (Elliot) Valya (Raymond, Jack, Robert) Veda (Justin, Penny, Chekov) Vee (Carla, Marie, Anna) Yuki/KGaara (Aion, Klarth) Zekoi (Mithos) Zen (Rita)

Comments

[wandbreaker]

Ohhh the interesting thing about her being terrified of Brian is that Saya and Brian are actually kind of intimate - I mean as intimate as Saya gets with anyone because Brian knows she's not human, and has treated her before, and Saya knows Brian's real name and his peculiar kind of art. So yeah, they could concievably gang up on her, but they would need a reason.

Technically there are gifts that Saya can use - she doesn't see like people - to see that something's not quite right with the world. I don't have her do it often because it can be a little god-moddy, and also, she has to open all of her eyes to do it (and that kind of gives her away). However, it might be an interesting thing to explore at some point? It doesn't have to be soon.

Saya actually noticed that in a sense - not that she's not welcome in their apartment, but she has thoughts about how little she does go there, and when she does it's usually for Blonde, not Carla.

She will keep poking and prodding and pushing - that's Saya's nature, it's just how she rolls - so I'm really glad it doesn't bother you that she does!

[dignity_misery]

Carla is definitely not quite right, if you're able to look to at the uh.... 'magical' layer of her existence. The wish she made didn't bring her back perfectly, which is why she eats as much as she does, and why she still has heightened smell/hearing, why she will still hiss like an animal if you really press her buttons, so if that would eventually be something Saya would like, that could work! Carla wouldn't mind that she's not human, Carla doesn't really see herself as human either anyway 8'|

The only person who has come to the apartment for Carla was Chase when he came to sew her up, after she freaked out over Birdboy's antics. It's a space she is really attached to, but on another level... She and Blonde have a comparable relationships to Saya, in that... they owe her for her help, so it's not weird for them to approach her together, but bringing her into their bed is... more of an invasion into Carla's relationship with Blonde. That feeling is probably even more now, since they have only been growing closer. Carla definitely thinks of Blonde's bed as hers despite having her own separate bedroom.